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Wow there really good mate great work
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I like both but the i like the ice better.
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i prefer the ice one, nice job.
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Adapt0rDi3 wrote really good! 9/10, maybe try a diffident font

idk. Changing the font would loose the feel of the image as I built the image around the text ;)
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Fire;

text seems not to be the focus, but just another part of the image. With no focal point, the image doesn't really come together.

The sub-text looks weird, and with both texts being thin fonts, it doesn't look as good as it could. The c4d text looks bad, and although i don't use it, a different font needs to be used. Preferably thicker. And 'i built the desktop around it can't be used as an excuse, re-do it around it to fit the feedback, that's what we're here for *.*

overall image looks clustered and the resources used looks amateur, with the flames, which are terribly overused, looking mis-positioned and random white( Maybe ash?) should be toned down.

ice;

sub-text looks better, colour compliments it, but i still don't like the combination of thin and thin.

Looks like you meant it to look icy, yet you can see where it is meant to be bullet shattered glass in numerous places. For a better result, leave less faults, put more effort and you will feel better in yourself.

don't necessarily like how the desktop is built sort of over the text, but that's just opinion.

nice attempt anyway.
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I like the fire one more. Nice work but change the font and the angle of the text - it would make it stand out more
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Very Nice 10/10

Keep it up
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Charizard wrote Very Nice 10/10

Keep it up


You Be Grave Digging :trollin:
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Very nice. The first good graphic in a long timeive seen on here.
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Could you send me the fire render? I can't find good pictures of fire ANYWHERE.
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