Very nice, however some parts of the lighting look a tad off, such as around the hand and bow (I think that's what the thing you use to play the violin is called, if not then I just explained what it is ), the lighting for that part just seems a little too "glowy" if that makes any sense at all, like the light is emanating from her hand and not from the actual light source.

The light cuts off really unexpectedly on the ground as well, I feel like the light would travel more across it and light more of it up, however dimly, but that might just be me.

Also, the violin looks a little shiny, not entirely sure what you can do about this, except maybe cut out the violin, duplicate it, change some of the CC for the duplicate and then put it on some kind of blending mode, but I'm not sure if that'd look good at all, so it might just be a lot of wasted effort for a small thing.

I know I'm nitpicking on this piece, and I'm incredibly out of practice so if you disagree with me then its certainly for a good reason, but I know that feedback towards you needs to be harsh. I must say I do like this more than your pen-tool pieces you were doing when last I saw work from you.

x3ternal_HavocX wrote Very nice, however some parts of the lighting look a tad off, such as around the hand and bow (I think that's what the thing you use to play the violin is called, if not then I just explained what it is ), the lighting for that part just seems a little too "glowy" if that makes any sense at all, like the light is emanating from her hand and not from the actual light source.

The light cuts off really unexpectedly on the ground as well, I feel like the light would travel more across it and light more of it up, however dimly, but that might just be me.

Also, the violin looks a little shiny, not entirely sure what you can do about this, except maybe cut out the violin, duplicate it, change some of the CC for the duplicate and then put it on some kind of blending mode, but I'm not sure if that'd look good at all, so it might just be a lot of wasted effort for a small thing.

I know I'm nitpicking on this piece, and I'm incredibly out of practice so if you disagree with me then its certainly for a good reason, but I know that feedback towards you needs to be harsh. I must say I do like this more than your pen-tool pieces you were doing when last I saw work from you.

I totally appreciate your feedback whether or not you think it's harsh lol. Atleast you took the time to offer this.

So thanks for taking the time to look in.

Inkz made a new photo manip YAY, BUT it is again a small bit of work

I joke it is nice like someone else side light is slightly off but you dont really see it unless you sit there looking at it for faults so it is fine, good idea keep them coming son.

Matt

MattMiller wrote Inkz made a new photo manip YAY, BUT it is again a small bit of work

I joke it is nice like someone else side light is slightly off but you dont really see it unless you sit there looking at it for faults so it is fine, good idea keep them coming son.

Matt

Yeah Ima sticking to this style until I can get a sense of perfecting them.

If you look at my favourites on dA you will see the style I'm going for.

Thanks Matty.