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Black Majesty Illustration + Going Away For A While
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So here's a design I started a long time ago.
I recently decided to try and finish it.
I was going to fully illustrate a detailed background too but I couldn't get anything to look right and natural.
So I made a simple clean background to emphasize her.
Please leave some comments!
PS
This will be my last design/post for a couple months.
I'm leaving for basic training on wednesday.
I'll see you next year with some new stuff!
I recently decided to try and finish it.
I was going to fully illustrate a detailed background too but I couldn't get anything to look right and natural.
So I made a simple clean background to emphasize her.
Please leave some comments!
PS
This will be my last design/post for a couple months.
I'm leaving for basic training on wednesday.
I'll see you next year with some new stuff!
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Not bad but when you come back you should draw her with different clothes.
Because I've been noticing you've been drawing her with dark boring clothes.
Because I've been noticing you've been drawing her with dark boring clothes.
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CriticaI wrote Not bad but when you come back you should draw her with different clothes.
Because I've been noticing you've been drawing her with dark boring clothes.
Mayyybe. I had a lot of ideas for clothing.
I settled on dark, slim, and sexy. ;)
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It's good, but left arm (Right if you're looking at it) is longer and seems a bit of of place.
And is it me or is her left arm bending the wrong way?
And is it me or is her left arm bending the wrong way?
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Her left arm seems longer because its almost straightened out.
Her right arm seems shorter and maybe weird because of the perspective. The forearm is coming forward at an angle. I don't see how it would be bent the wrong way though.
Her right arm seems shorter and maybe weird because of the perspective. The forearm is coming forward at an angle. I don't see how it would be bent the wrong way though.
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Her left arm seems longer because its almost straightened out.
Her right arm seems shorter and maybe weird because of the perspective. The forearm is coming forward at an angle. I don't see how it would be bent the wrong way though.
Her right arm seems shorter and maybe weird because of the perspective. The forearm is coming forward at an angle. I don't see how it would be bent the wrong way though.
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Haven't really posted alot on your threads, but seen alot of your work whilst browsing through graphics forum from time to time and you always post alot of great work, hope to see you post some new ideas in future. Keep on doing it, good luck at basic training!
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Awesome illustration, I really admire your style. I like it how you've kept the background minimal - as you say it emphasizes the illustration. If you had went with the more detailed background I think it would look too complex, taking the focus away from her. I also like the 'queen' typography, and think the illustration/type overlap is effective.
Good luck with your basic training. Don't forget to come back here afterwards!
Good luck with your basic training. Don't forget to come back here afterwards!
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Illustrated wrote Her left arm seems longer because its almost straightened out.
Her right arm seems shorter and maybe weird because of the perspective. The forearm is coming forward at an angle. I don't see how it would be bent the wrong way though.
So good you posted it twice xD on second look the arm proportion was just my eyes playing tricks, but the arm still looks like its bending the wrong way... The fold in her arm is the wrong side, it should be on the inside, not the out side (closer to her body).
Correct me if I'm wrong
But still ignore me, I'm tired I'm probably seeing things. Maybe I'm imagining this...
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