I want a copy of the game as soon as it comes out!!! That looks so so so good! :O

Frantically wrote I want a copy of the game as soon as it comes out!!! That looks so so so good! :O

Haha, make sure to subscribe me to know about the updates! *shameless promotion* umm ... BTW, thanks!

You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy shit. It's awful.

k0ngslayer wrote You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy ****. It's awful.

Yeah, it's pretty awful. English is not my main language, I'm so sorry :L

k0ngslayer wrote You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy ****. It's awful.

I don't understand? What has he spelt wrong...
*Scratch that I just found Out It's ok though man! Keep trying, it looks great aswell.

Lifts wrote

k0ngslayer wrote You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy ****. It's awful.

I don't understand? What has he spelt wrong...

I don't know which one that I spelt wrong but about the grammar, he's right :L

Lifts wrote

k0ngslayer wrote You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy ****. It's awful.

I don't understand? What has he spelt wrong...

You want me to go through it? Ok.
'Is there a humanity on them?'
'Is there way to advice them?'
'That humanity still exist'

The description:
It's a survival horror game that takes place on park where you wait for your friend to come but after a few hours waiting, your friend still not appear infront of your eyes, because of your curiosity, you explore the park even it's close. What you found is not expected

k0ngslayer wrote

Lifts wrote

k0ngslayer wrote You need to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Holy ****. It's awful.

I don't understand? What has he spelt wrong...

You want me to go through it? Ok.
'Is there a humanity on them?'
'Is there way to advice them?'
'That humanity still exist'

The description:
It's a survival horror game that takes place on park where you wait for your friend to come but after a few hours waiting, your friend still not appear infront of your eyes, because of your curiosity, you explore the park even it's close. What you found is not expected

Well, since your main language is English, can you help me correct all of those grammar errors? Would appreciate it

Alanj2007 wrote

Well, since your main language is English, can you help me correct all of those grammar errors? Would appreciate it

Sure.
'Is there a humanity on them?' I don't really know what you mean by this so unfortunately I can't help. If you describe what you mean I can help.

'Is there way to advice them?'
Is there a way to advise them?

'That humanity still exist'
That humanity still exists'

It's a survival horror game that takes place on park where you wait for your friend to come but after a few hours waiting, your friend still not appear infront of your eyes, because of your curiosity, you explore the park even it's close. What you found is not expected

This survival horror game takes place in a park. You wait for your friend to come but after a few hours of waiting, your friend doesn't appear. You're curious so you decide to explore the park after it has closed. When looking, what you find is not what you expected.

Nothing top notch, may be some mistakes in there but it's an improvement.