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CornishPasty
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hey this is my first ever edit can u tell me what you think and what i should improve on ? thanks !

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CornishPasty
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anyone ? 202020202020202
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ITs good but its kinda choppy
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Not bad, For your first time.
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thats pretty good for a first try
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CornishPasty
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thankyou i am getting better though
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