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Zef wrote
PenTool wrote nice work zefy wish i could pentool


...the AwkoTaco moment when your name is pentool, and you cant pentool. o.O

well im pretty i was joking considering im the leader of penfreakz
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Thats really cool! You are very talented!
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im loving it dude.

great curve work, great imagination, great colours.


im also loving the text at the side, really fits in with the piece.


just some tips:

next time try working on a big canvas then reducing the size to reduce the pixels.

if you are willing to put the time in, maybe practice using illustrater (thats if you dont already use it) because it has a pretty sweet pentool for curves and what not.

also, maybe take more time with the shading and choose more sweeter spots to put it.


as a overall piece its really nice, especcially as its your own design aswell.

9/10 pal. a very well done

and thats alot of layers
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Subnormal wrote im loving it dude.

great curve work, great imagination, great colours.


im also loving the text at the side, really fits in with the piece.


just some tips:

next time try working on a big canvas then reducing the size to reduce the pixels.

if you are willing to put the time in, maybe practice using illustrater (thats if you dont already use it) because it has a pretty sweet pentool for curves and what not.

also, maybe take more time with the shading and choose more sweeter spots to put it.


as a overall piece its really nice, especcially as its your own design aswell.

9/10 pal. a very well done

and thats alot of layers



Yeah it was originally just the head so canvas size was not originally an issue. As for the highlight and shadows, i had to leave but i wanted to finish before i left for 2 weeks. But thanks for your input
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Not the most realistic looking piece and not the most advanced but in my eyes, it looks a bit pixelated on the edges which takes away from the piece itself.
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I don't like it.
The edges are pixely and messy as ****.
And you used the same stroke size for every line so it just looks poorly done.
Vary to stroke size and add better shading.
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Hobbyist wrote I don't like it.
The edges are pixely and messy as ****.
And you used the same stroke size for every line so it just looks poorly done.
Vary to stroke size and add better shading.


Like i said earlier, i did it on a small canvas, not in illustrator and the highlight/shadowing was rushed because i had to leave for 2 weeks. Its not finished and i have the work paths saved to do in illustrator, but your opinion is valid.
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Zef wrote
Hobbyist wrote I don't like it.
The edges are pixely and messy as ****.
And you used the same stroke size for every line so it just looks poorly done.
Vary to stroke size and add better shading.


Like i said earlier, i did it on a small canvas, not in illustrator and the highlight/shadowing was rushed because i had to leave for 2 weeks. Its not finished and i have the work paths saved to do in illustrator, but your opinion is valid.


It doesn't really matter if you did it in Photoshop. You still could have made some nice clean vector shapes.
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