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My little rap. Part 1. What do u think?
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  • Challenger
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Btw, I'm only 14. So don't judge harshly. Thanks
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  • Wise One
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I like your word play but dont stress your words too much on the ends of verses. Just keep a flow going I guess but besides that you're good!
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