CriticaI wrote

IMMERSIVE wrote

CriticaI wrote The logo at the top is way to big.
And the second section should be moved below the app section.

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It would take to long to scroll to get to the main information

Imo all you'd need to do is scroll down a little and there's more emphasis on the navigation. I did try it with a smaller logo, but I liked it a little bigger

Most people don't like to scroll so its best to have the important things at the top of the page.
If you don't believe me look at any popular website.

Fair enough man, when I do actually develop the site I'll probably make the logo smaller, cheers for the suggestion

Uhm, it alright. Nothing new really, the whole vintage style has been interpreted for a long time now. Try explore out of the ordinary.

I think the words 'Cafe' and 'Verve' need to be tweaked a little. They seem a little wonky and squished. You should probably open up the kerning for it - same with the letters and numbers in the X.

I also think the X is a little too small and might look better if you made it a little bigger to fill up more space. Have you tried using a different typeface for "Finest Coffees"? It might give more variety and better contrast if you use a serifed font since I feel like the main brand name should have it's own unique type to it.

Keep up your work! very clean! 10/10

Very clean and nice, 10/10

I'll give it an 8/10 - if you're going for simple/clean you've achieved your goal. I personally think it's a little too clean.

exoticschnitzel wrote I think the words 'Cafe' and 'Verve' need to be tweaked a little. They seem a little wonky and squished. You should probably open up the kerning for it - same with the letters and numbers in the X.

I also think the X is a little too small and might look better if you made it a little bigger to fill up more space. Have you tried using a different typeface for "Finest Coffees"? It might give more variety and better contrast if you use a serifed font since I feel like the main brand name should have it's own unique type to it.

Yeah that's a really good idea, thanks man!