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A Zombie Story by TTG_ROBERT
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ROSCOZ APPROVED OF THIS this is not a nazi zombie story just a normal zombie story
Gun fire in the distance is all you could hear in Stalingrad Russia. There were two submachine gunners outside of the safe house picking of the remaining zombies while the general and his 2 body guards searched the safe house for food and water. A few minutes later when the general had stepped outside all of the remaining zombies were either dead or unable to walk. There were a few bits and pieces of food they had gotten from the safe house but not enough to feed the soldiers for more than a day. But in the distance just behind a garbage can I could see a little boy and two women waiting for the soldiers to leave to search the rest of the house but me being as nice as I am going to get them all the food as I rose my rifle I could see something moving on the 3rd floor of the building right above the general. So I zoomed in to see what it was it was a zombie looking hungrier than ever staring down at the general. Now I had a choice shoot the zombie and have more zombies come to the gun shot and probably kill the little boy and the 2 women or shoot the general let the zombie jump down and kill the guards and then kill the zombie letting the boy and the women get inside safely just in time for the zombies to get there and finish eating the soldiers. Or there was the alternative turn around and walk away and let things fold out by them self’s. but what fun would that be so I aimed at the generals head waiting to see if I could align a shot where I could get the general and a guard. And once I saw the shot I took it as soon as I took that shot I saw the zombie jump. He jumped right out of that window and landed right on the back of a soldier the soldiers back instantly cracked and he died right away then the zombie turned and leaped for another soldier and ripped his throat out and slammed him to the ground. the other 3 soldiers took aim at the zombie I fired another shot this time hitting one soldier in the head and another in the shoulder the zombie tackled the other standing soldier. The soldier I had shot in the
shoulder had now pulled it pistol and started fire but his little pee shooter would harm the zombie. the zombie stopped feeding on the other soldier and jumped on the one with the pistol and started to feast I gave it 1 second before I pulled the trigger surprisingly I hit it in the throat I usually never miss the head the zombie flew back and hit its head on the ground knowing it wasn’t dead I pulled the trigger once more and this time it was a headshot. By this time I could hear the screams of the zombies coming to my location I signalled for the boy and the 2 women to go to the safe house and that is exactly what they did. I raised my rifle and took aim down the street I could see about 7 zombies running towards me and one of them must have been going 40mph because he was already at the garbage can where the boy and the 2 women were but the boy was already inside along with one of the women the other was just about to slide through the door when the zombie grabbed her by the neck and dragged her away i fired one shot and it hit the zombie right in the middle of his head the women ran to one of the soldiers and picked up his rifle she then ran to the door and slammed it shut. she didn’t even take aim she just started to fire at the zombies which was one of the dumbest ideas ever she had only taken down one zombie out of the whole clip she fired by then there were over 15 zombies slowly jogging toward her she did know how to reload so she just picked up another machine gun and started to fire this time she took aim not good aim but she took aim she took out 3 zombies before they had pinned her to the ground and were eating her by then there was nothing I was going to do she was already dead and if I fired another shot they would have known where it came from and came running to the 2nd floor where I was so I slowly and carefully picked up a rock and threw it in the nearest alley way and then picked up my stuff and ran the zombies ran toward where the rock had landed and searched for what they thought was a person I went back to my safe house which I would have to say was the safest place there was there were 15 survivors there all from the military except for one who was a 17 year old boy with his father’s .357 magnum it didn’t do as much damage as my rifle or some of the rifles at the HQ but it did the job. At the safe house we were running low on food and could only feed the population for another week maybe. which meant I would have to send out my men to go looking for food which was very dangerous because we didn’t have the best of guns the strongest gun we had was a double barrel shotgun I found in a barn just east of town which is where I found this 17 year old boy, I was searching for survivors along with two of my rifle men when we saw about 5 zombies banging on the doors and windows of the barn. so me and my men took aim and killed them all we then approached the barn and out of a window a boy poked his head out and aimed his pistol at us we then took aim at him and we did the check to see if he was a zombie or a human we did the normal check
which was just looking at his mouth and his face to see if there was blood dripping from his mouth or any rot in his face so we started to ask if there were any other survivors in the barn he said there was one, His father we asked if he would allow us to enter the barn he said it’s not safe in there... we were wondering why he would say that then all of a sudden we heard a scream of a zombie from inside the barn the boy turned around and screamed he raised his magnum and took fire three shots he fired. We asked if he was alright he was fine. We then allowed us entry into the barn and we asked where his father was he pointed at the dead zombie on the ground. We asked "what happened to him"? ,the boy told us he was bitten while they were running from a horde of zombies at the beginning of the invasion they were a mile away from the horde but a zombie came from out of an alley way and bit his leg. The father shot a bullet into the zombie’s rib cage with a double barrel shotgun. The zombie flew back into the trash can behind him the father took another shot this time hitting the zombie in the face and the neck which had killed it. Then they ran to this barn and the father strapped himself to too a chair and giving the boy the magnum telling him if he turned to shoot him in the head and then the zombies started showing then we came. The boy told us he didn’t have the strength to shoot his own father when his father turned into a zombie so he waited... until now. We took the boy back to the safe house and kept him safe. Back at the HQ When I was talking about the food situation at the safe house the boy volunteered to come with me but I couldn’t let him come he was too old. He defiantly didn’t like the word no he kept insisting to come and finally I allowed him to come he grabbed his father’s double barrel and put the magnum in his pocket me him and 3 other soldiers who had Thompsons went on the search for food we first looked for the nearest market when we reached the market there were surprisingly only a few zombies in the parking lot we then hid near the cars as we shouldered our weapons and took aim me with my sharpshooter would have no problem picking of the few zombies and scouting out the area for any Russian or German soldiers there were none when we got closer to the market I saw a movement on the roof of the market. It was a Russian soldier he had a ppsh and took aim I screamed for my men to take cover. and before the words came out of my mouth the soldier had taken fire he hit one of my men in the chest a few times which had sent him to the ground in pain the boy was already behind a car and I was under a car taking aim at the Russian soldier my other man was moving up as the boy was firing his double barrel at the soldier none of the shots hitting the Russian but it gave cover for my man to move up and right as his head popped of all you could hear was the roaring shot from a Russian PTRS which was a high powered sniper rifle. When I looked at my soldier his arm was on the ground and he must have been in shock because he didn’t yell out in pain instead he got on his knees and started to prey within another second I could hear another shot from the rifle this one taking my soldiers head right off his body. So I turned only to see about 6 zombies running to a building behind me which is probably where the shots had come from a moment later I heard the fire of a German mp44 and then dead silence I turned and back at the market and saw the soldier looking out at the parking lot searching to find where we were and I saw the boy stand and take fire with his .357 magnum he hit the soldier surprisingly right in the chest and this was my time to shine I fired my rifle and the bullet landed right into the soldiers neck which had taken his head off. We then moved up toward the market I searched the bodies of my men and took their sub machine guns gave one to the boy and I took one myself the boy put the machine gun on his back and I put my sniper rifle on my back and shouldered the sub machine gun. We walked towards the market only to find it empty and raided you could see the workers that used to work here they were dead all over the building I then moved up stairs while the boy stayed down stairs making sure there were no zombies left it was up to him if it were up to me he would be holding my hand I didn’t want anything to happen to him I could see the true soldier in his eyes when he was in battle I have seen him train with the other soldier at the safe house he would do just as good if not better than them and I couldn’t let anything happen to him but I had no control over him so when I was on the roof I searched the body and found a note and a map the map had circled a German camp then had an underground safe zone. I read the note and it said there were survivors there Russian soldiers with allot of food said the note. I must bring this to the others and we must check this out if it meant killing the soldiers then that is what I would have to be for the survival of our people so me and the boy took stride toward the safe house where my other men where, to give the good news and the bad news.
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Gun fire in the distance is all you could hear in Stalingrad Russia. There were two submachine gunners outside of the safe house picking of the remaining zombies while the general and his 2 body guards searched the safe house for food and water. A few minutes later when the general had stepped outside all of the remaining zombies were either dead or unable to walk. There were a few bits and pieces of food they had gotten from the safe house but not enough to feed the soldiers for more than a day. But in the distance just behind a garbage can I could see a little boy and two women waiting for the soldiers to leave to search the rest of the house but me being as nice as I am going to get them all the food as I rose my rifle I could see something moving on the 3rd floor of the building right above the general. So I zoomed in to see what it was it was a zombie looking hungrier than ever staring down at the general. Now I had a choice shoot the zombie and have more zombies come to the gun shot and probably kill the little boy and the 2 women or shoot the general let the zombie jump down and kill the guards and then kill the zombie letting the boy and the women get inside safely just in time for the zombies to get there and finish eating the soldiers. Or there was the alternative turn around and walk away and let things fold out by them self’s. but what fun would that be so I aimed at the generals head waiting to see if I could align a shot where I could get the general and a guard. And once I saw the shot I took it as soon as I took that shot I saw the zombie jump. He jumped right out of that window and landed right on the back of a soldier the soldiers back instantly cracked and he died right away then the zombie turned and leaped for another soldier and ripped his throat out and slammed him to the ground. the other 3 soldiers took aim at the zombie I fired another shot this time hitting one soldier in the head and another in the shoulder the zombie tackled the other standing soldier. The soldier I had shot in the
shoulder had now pulled it pistol and started fire but his little pee shooter would harm the zombie. the zombie stopped feeding on the other soldier and jumped on the one with the pistol and started to feast I gave it 1 second before I pulled the trigger surprisingly I hit it in the throat I usually never miss the head the zombie flew back and hit its head on the ground knowing it wasn’t dead I pulled the trigger once more and this time it was a headshot. By this time I could hear the screams of the zombies coming to my location I signalled for the boy and the 2 women to go to the safe house and that is exactly what they did. I raised my rifle and took aim down the street I could see about 7 zombies running towards me and one of them must have been going 40mph because he was already at the garbage can where the boy and the 2 women were but the boy was already inside along with one of the women the other was just about to slide through the door when the zombie grabbed her by the neck and dragged her away i fired one shot and it hit the zombie right in the middle of his head the women ran to one of the soldiers and picked up his rifle she then ran to the door and slammed it shut. she didn’t even take aim she just started to fire at the zombies which was one of the dumbest ideas ever she had only taken down one zombie out of the whole clip she fired by then there were over 15 zombies slowly jogging toward her she did know how to reload so she just picked up another machine gun and started to fire this time she took aim not good aim but she took aim she took out 3 zombies before they had pinned her to the ground and were eating her by then there was nothing I was going to do she was already dead and if I fired another shot they would have known where it came from and came running to the 2nd floor where I was so I slowly and carefully picked up a rock and threw it in the nearest alley way and then picked up my stuff and ran the zombies ran toward where the rock had landed and searched for what they thought was a person I went back to my safe house which I would have to say was the safest place there was there were 15 survivors there all from the military except for one who was a 17 year old boy with his father’s .357 magnum it didn’t do as much damage as my rifle or some of the rifles at the HQ but it did the job. At the safe house we were running low on food and could only feed the population for another week maybe. which meant I would have to send out my men to go looking for food which was very dangerous because we didn’t have the best of guns the strongest gun we had was a double barrel shotgun I found in a barn just east of town which is where I found this 17 year old boy, I was searching for survivors along with two of my rifle men when we saw about 5 zombies banging on the doors and windows of the barn. so me and my men took aim and killed them all we then approached the barn and out of a window a boy poked his head out and aimed his pistol at us we then took aim at him and we did the check to see if he was a zombie or a human we did the normal check
which was just looking at his mouth and his face to see if there was blood dripping from his mouth or any rot in his face so we started to ask if there were any other survivors in the barn he said there was one, His father we asked if he would allow us to enter the barn he said it’s not safe in there... we were wondering why he would say that then all of a sudden we heard a scream of a zombie from inside the barn the boy turned around and screamed he raised his magnum and took fire three shots he fired. We asked if he was alright he was fine. We then allowed us entry into the barn and we asked where his father was he pointed at the dead zombie on the ground. We asked "what happened to him"? ,the boy told us he was bitten while they were running from a horde of zombies at the beginning of the invasion they were a mile away from the horde but a zombie came from out of an alley way and bit his leg. The father shot a bullet into the zombie’s rib cage with a double barrel shotgun. The zombie flew back into the trash can behind him the father took another shot this time hitting the zombie in the face and the neck which had killed it. Then they ran to this barn and the father strapped himself to too a chair and giving the boy the magnum telling him if he turned to shoot him in the head and then the zombies started showing then we came. The boy told us he didn’t have the strength to shoot his own father when his father turned into a zombie so he waited... until now. We took the boy back to the safe house and kept him safe. Back at the HQ When I was talking about the food situation at the safe house the boy volunteered to come with me but I couldn’t let him come he was too old. He defiantly didn’t like the word no he kept insisting to come and finally I allowed him to come he grabbed his father’s double barrel and put the magnum in his pocket me him and 3 other soldiers who had Thompsons went on the search for food we first looked for the nearest market when we reached the market there were surprisingly only a few zombies in the parking lot we then hid near the cars as we shouldered our weapons and took aim me with my sharpshooter would have no problem picking of the few zombies and scouting out the area for any Russian or German soldiers there were none when we got closer to the market I saw a movement on the roof of the market. It was a Russian soldier he had a ppsh and took aim I screamed for my men to take cover. and before the words came out of my mouth the soldier had taken fire he hit one of my men in the chest a few times which had sent him to the ground in pain the boy was already behind a car and I was under a car taking aim at the Russian soldier my other man was moving up as the boy was firing his double barrel at the soldier none of the shots hitting the Russian but it gave cover for my man to move up and right as his head popped of all you could hear was the roaring shot from a Russian PTRS which was a high powered sniper rifle. When I looked at my soldier his arm was on the ground and he must have been in shock because he didn’t yell out in pain instead he got on his knees and started to prey within another second I could hear another shot from the rifle this one taking my soldiers head right off his body. So I turned only to see about 6 zombies running to a building behind me which is probably where the shots had come from a moment later I heard the fire of a German mp44 and then dead silence I turned and back at the market and saw the soldier looking out at the parking lot searching to find where we were and I saw the boy stand and take fire with his .357 magnum he hit the soldier surprisingly right in the chest and this was my time to shine I fired my rifle and the bullet landed right into the soldiers neck which had taken his head off. We then moved up toward the market I searched the bodies of my men and took their sub machine guns gave one to the boy and I took one myself the boy put the machine gun on his back and I put my sniper rifle on my back and shouldered the sub machine gun. We walked towards the market only to find it empty and raided you could see the workers that used to work here they were dead all over the building I then moved up stairs while the boy stayed down stairs making sure there were no zombies left it was up to him if it were up to me he would be holding my hand I didn’t want anything to happen to him I could see the true soldier in his eyes when he was in battle I have seen him train with the other soldier at the safe house he would do just as good if not better than them and I couldn’t let anything happen to him but I had no control over him so when I was on the roof I searched the body and found a note and a map the map had circled a German camp then had an underground safe zone. I read the note and it said there were survivors there Russian soldiers with allot of food said the note. I must bring this to the others and we must check this out if it meant killing the soldiers then that is what I would have to be for the survival of our people so me and the boy took stride toward the safe house where my other men where, to give the good news and the bad news.
HOPE YOU LIKE IT
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so thats wot you have been doing for the past hour! lol
because i was wondering if u like the avatar that i requested
for u, and i see that u are using it.
enyways nice dude!
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because i was wondering if u like the avatar that i requested
for u, and i see that u are using it.
enyways nice dude!
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Holy crap!!Huge wall of text.I got lost alot,but from what I read it's pretty good.Try to leave some more spaces though.
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Not very good grammer and the man takes it all like a joke. He kills his own men for a worthless boy and his mom. I give it a 2/10
For example. Thats one sentence. Try to use more capitals and more sentences.
she didn’t even take aim she just started to fire at the zombies which was one of the dumbest ideas ever she had only taken down one zombie out of the whole clip she fired by then there were over 15 zombies slowly jogging toward her she did know how to reload so she just picked up another machine gun and started to fire this time she took aim not good aim but she took aim she took out 3 zombies before they had pinned her to the ground and were eating her by then there was nothing I was going to do she was already dead and if I fired another shot they would have known where it came from and came running to the 2nd floor where I was so I slowly and carefully picked up a rock and threw it in the nearest alley way and then picked up my stuff and ran the zombies ran toward where the rock had landed and searched for what they thought was a person I went back to my safe house which I would have to say was the safest place there was there were 15 survivors there all from the military except for one who was a 17 year old boy with his father’s .357 magnum it didn’t do as much damage as my rifle or some of the rifles at the HQ but it did the job
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For example. Thats one sentence. Try to use more capitals and more sentences.
she didn’t even take aim she just started to fire at the zombies which was one of the dumbest ideas ever she had only taken down one zombie out of the whole clip she fired by then there were over 15 zombies slowly jogging toward her she did know how to reload so she just picked up another machine gun and started to fire this time she took aim not good aim but she took aim she took out 3 zombies before they had pinned her to the ground and were eating her by then there was nothing I was going to do she was already dead and if I fired another shot they would have known where it came from and came running to the 2nd floor where I was so I slowly and carefully picked up a rock and threw it in the nearest alley way and then picked up my stuff and ran the zombies ran toward where the rock had landed and searched for what they thought was a person I went back to my safe house which I would have to say was the safest place there was there were 15 survivors there all from the military except for one who was a 17 year old boy with his father’s .357 magnum it didn’t do as much damage as my rifle or some of the rifles at the HQ but it did the job
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ok im not finished it its only the begining any ideas on what should happen next?
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Spelled my name wrong at top
But you should edit the grammar and spelling and spacing it will help reading it alot and make it easier.
Wow I had terrible grammar in that sentence
But you should edit the grammar and spelling and spacing it will help reading it alot and make it easier.
Wow I had terrible grammar in that sentence
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ok well i will do that leter and i editied your name
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It was a nice story, got lost in it a couple times though
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It is a nice story. But you need to space it out. SO people won't get lost and skip a line by mistake. Great story. Just work on Grammer.
Peace Peoplez
Peace Peoplez
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Yeah just work on the grammar
but it's really good story!
but it's really good story!
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