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My intro made from scratch
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i made this intro for a kid who pm'd me saying he wanted an intro with a tomahawk in it
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Ewwwww!
I just puked in my mouth a lil :trollin:
Might want to work a little harder?
Decent for making it out of scratch...
5/10
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i dont realy like it sry
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the kid told me what he wanted and im not getting paid so i didnt try as hard as if i had been. but thanks for the constructive criticism
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it ok but could be better
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The colour choices wreck what could be an OK intro.
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i dont think it is thst good 3/10
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Much too basic.

Theres a difference from basic and clean.

This needs alot of work.

But it seems as if your new to this. So just keep practicing and you will soon get better.
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