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First, here is the beat
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Here are the lyrics
Hey baby girl,
what's your name?
what's your style?
what's your game?
Girl I think you lookin fine
Thinkin' bout makin you mine
I wanna be yours
And I hope you'll be mine
Even though it'll take some time
What'do we got in this world?
We got a god damn beautiful girl
Looking all lonely, what a bummer
I'll make this your best summer
I came up with this just for you
To show how much you mean to me
I love you girl
Can't you see?
You just be you and i'll be me
I hope you love me too, yes i do
oh yes i do
I'm spittin these raps alone at night
Hopein that me and you are tight
Wishin' these it wasnt this hard to rhyme
Cuz I been writin' a long time
Wearin my hoodie sittin in bed
Thinkin about whatcha said




Feedback please I am writing this for a girl I really like. I will rep for any good additions to the lyrics
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thats hot....................
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EmergencyAirdrop wrote thats hot....................
Hahah do you like it so far?
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post a audio file with you singing and ill tell you if its good lyrics and beats good depends on your voice bruh
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wowwww, all i can say is we should rap battle. good luck with that "rap" man
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Dude you gotta have a siick tongue to spit those lyrics to that fast beat but i like it!
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--Eminem-- wrote
EmergencyAirdrop wrote thats hot....................
Hahah do you like it so far?
Yeah... its awesome....
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lxI_EPiiC_lxI wrote Dude you gotta have a siick tongue to spit those lyrics to that fast beat but i like it!
Haha I guess I'm a fast spittin white boy 8)
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wow,
this is actually really good,
great job 10/10
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xBaconPotato wrote wow,
this is actually really good,
great job 10/10
Thanks man! Means a lot to me
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