I really like the clouds.

Render seems a little LQ to me. Can't really find any flow or lighting.

Text is good though.

It could use work, 7/10.

Is that Ice Cream!!!!

Jaguar wrote I really like the clouds.

Render seems a little LQ to me. Can't really find any flow or lighting.

Text is good though.

It could use work, 7/10.

Sorry, not to be harsh but you are blind if you cant see lighting.

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Jaguar wrote I really like the clouds.

Render seems a little LQ to me. Can't really find any flow or lighting.

Text is good though.

It could use work, 7/10.

you are so wrong. there is a ton of lighting in the fractals and behind his head. and he didnt use a normal smudge technique so the flow is hard to notice. but still there.

But nice job in this. He blends well and the color scheme is awesome.

I would suggest clouds with higher quality. But besides that, it is very nice and simple/ Great work.

Oh gawd >.< getting double teamed by teh GFX bros.

I take back what I said about the lighting, its slight but its there.

Dont kill me

lol im not gonna kill you

and @John_Us. you dont want higher quality clouds because they will not blend well.

I dont really like the tag, I'm sure you can do better. The blending is off and the background looks to textured/dirty. One thing I've noticed with you is that you dont seem to put anything in front of the render, besides text. I would add some more effects/light sources/c4ds on top of the render to help it blend.

Red: The blending is off. I can see you used a soft eraser on the back of his head, and it just doesnt look good. (top circle"

The bottom cirlce outlines where I think you should have erased, to give the effect of the cloud moving infront of the render. It would have looked alot better imo.

Green: Nothing really important, but I dont like how the clouds just end. I think it would have looked better if it went all the way across the screen. Once again though, just my opinion.

Yellow: I think the text is a little to big, and isnt placed very well. it draws attention away from the focal. In the future, use the rule of thirds to place text.

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looks really nice bro im new to photoshop (just got it yesterday) i really need someone good to mentor me through teamviewer