Theres really not much to it. All I can see is a little smudging and a flare. The flare is a little too bright.

Make the cinematic borders smaller, they're really thick.

But I like the text, it fits well.

Keep at it, 6/10.

Ok, first of all, the text stands out so much from the rest of the piece that it takes away from the focal and the blending. Also, if the text didn't stand out so much, the left part of the tag would look very plain.

Good attempt keep it up

Jaguar wrote Theres really not much to it. All I can see is a little smudging and a flare. The flare is a little too bright.

Make the cinematic borders smaller, they're really thick.

But I like the text, it fits well.

Keep at it, 6/10.

Thanks for some good CnC. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Borders too wide. Don't like the text. 6/10

The cinematic bars are way too thick

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-red: bad lighting. flares dont really add a good light source. try adding a soft white brush. or smudge and set to color dodge.

-yellow: very blurry. looks like its on gausian blur. It looks distorted. Just make it clear.

-blue: badge blending technigue. im not a fan of just duplicating the render and lower the opacity. it really just takes the focal off.

Maybe change some things and add a V2.

so thats why you needed the chinese text. ha
but i like it its very good.

alright stop commenting on the cinematic bars i get it already
and just remember its just my 5th tag.

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-red: bad lighting. flares dont really add a good light source. try adding a soft white brush. or smudge and set to color dodge.

-yellow: very blurry. looks like its on gausian blur. It looks distorted. Just make it clear.

-blue: badge blending technigue. im not a fan of just duplicating the render and lower the opacity. it really just takes the focal off.

Maybe change some things and add a V2.

Wow that pretty much sums up what i could have possibly said.