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iDropTheBass
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I got really bored started with outlining a dude and just did this...

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looks plain, and the text is unreadble, try to change up the font, and also add some lighting into it, and lower the opacity on "Got guns?" "Simplicity is key" and "Designed by Shapes" to like a 60% or lower or higher, just try to make it look like its fading away like the star burst effect, i would rate this a 4/10 8)

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Transparent wrote looks plain, and the text is unreadble, try to change up the font, and also add some lighting into it, and lower the opacity on "Got guns?" "Simplicity is key" and "Designed by Shapes" to like a 60% or lower or higher, just try to make it look like its fading away like the star burst effect, i would rate this a 4/10 8)

Practice makes perfect bro


the text fill and opacity are both on 55% Ha
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Its pretty simple, Looks good though. Nice job. 7/10
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iDropTheBass wrote
Transparent wrote looks plain, and the text is unreadble, try to change up the font, and also add some lighting into it, and lower the opacity on "Got guns?" "Simplicity is key" and "Designed by Shapes" to like a 60% or lower or higher, just try to make it look like its fading away like the star burst effect, i would rate this a 4/10 8)

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the text fill and opacity are both on 55% Ha
well like i said, lower it more, and higher a bit more the custom ak47 one... 8)
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iDropTheBass wrote I got really bored started with outlining a dude and just did this...

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i dont know i think the saying are not that goot the picture is good i just dont like got guns? its too much like got milk? lmao :trollin:
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looks got 9/10 , nice but is kinda plain!
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looks good 7/10 much better than i could do
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It's not very good :/
I suggest instead of putting it at 50% opacity to use clipping masks instead. They are a great way to get a nice effect. I honestly don't know if you just took the picture and put it on a different background or what, but it can use some work. Try adding more effects, work on the lighting, and the depth and flow need some work as well. It's a nice start, but it's no where near done.

At the current stage, 3/10. Better luck next time.
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