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#31. Posted:
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Umps-Fanboy wrote
XxGHITxX wrote cool story bro i liked it
thanks haha everyones good feed back is awesome. im going to start adding contromentary videos on my storys next once i learn how to add Voices to my recordings i think that would be funny
u should do that
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Good story dude :arrow: 8)
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Horrible sentence structure, no designated plot, lack of strong words, your spelling is off, etc.

You would get an F if you handed this into your English class.
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RaitoKunRyuk wrote Horrible sentence structure, no designated plot, lack of strong words, your spelling is off, etc.

You would get an F if you handed this into your English class.
we r not in school but i agree with you
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RaitoKunRyuk wrote Horrible sentence structure, no designated plot, lack of strong words, your spelling is off, etc.

You would get an F if you handed this into your English class.
haha sweet just what i wanted the IDGAF Police jk thanks for the feedback
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I made a story post on here about an jtag that can't be banned. Except it was suspenseful and had proper grammar and made sense.
It also had 850+ views and 120+ posts or so...
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TTGFallout wrote I made a story post on here about an jtag that can't be banned. Except it was suspenseful and had proper grammar and made sense.
It also had 850+ views and 120+ posts or so...
nice! im hoping that where this one is headed
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Uhhh cool story bro. No literaly cool story i luved it
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TTGxZOROHD wrote Uhhh cool story bro. No literaly cool story i luved it
haha thanks im going to ad probably 2 more tomorrow afternoon
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nice post not bad bro
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