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2nd real attempt at a forum sig, took into account some of the previous advice. A rate and CnC would be nice, tell me what I did good, and what I need to improve/add.

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Loving all of the feedback i'm getting.
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The render is blurred which gives no focal point.

Depth is way off.

No lighting, blending, or flow.

3/10
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iPhoram wrote The render is blurred which gives no focal point.

Depth is way off.

No lighting, blending, or flow.

3/10


Right, i'm a newbie to graphics. Can you tell me how to add those aspects into my work? Like a brief over-view?

Thanks for the feedback btw
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Phaeleh wrote
iPhoram wrote The render is blurred which gives no focal point.

Depth is way off.

No lighting, blending, or flow.

3/10


Right, i'm a newbie to graphics. Can you tell me how to add those aspects into my work? Like a brief over-view?

Thanks for the feedback btw


Depth - Sharpen the render and blur the bg. (Focal Point Tooo<)

Flow is just Flow obviously.
Don't blur the render.
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the render is blured...

but apart from that its cool!

7/10
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iPhoram wrote
Phaeleh wrote
iPhoram wrote The render is blurred which gives no focal point.

Depth is way off.

No lighting, blending, or flow.

3/10


Right, i'm a newbie to graphics. Can you tell me how to add those aspects into my work? Like a brief over-view?

Thanks for the feedback btw


Depth - Sharpen the render and blur the bg. (Focal Point Tooo<)

Flow is just Flow obviously.
Don't blur the render.


Right, thanks for that. I'll make sure to do all of that in my next piece
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Its looks cool.

A lot of smudging going on and the render is kinda hard to make out.

Still a nice piece of work.
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Pxrn wrote the render is blured...

but apart from that its cool!

7/10


PLuM wrote
Its looks cool.

A lot of smudging going on and the render is kinda hard to make out.

Still a nice piece of work.


Thanks for the feedback, i'll work on reducing the smudging
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