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rate my abstract art */10
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proof its mine because i am army

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The text and background kills it.
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Hobbyist wrote The text and background kills it.

im cunfused are you saying the text kills it?
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2/10

problem:
transparent BG
the image itself is just a render
There is no focal point
Cant see what you are trying to accomplish

Fixing:
Give it a purpose
Select a certain theme
New colors
Fill the background

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Hobbyist wrote The text and background kills it.

im cunfused are you saying the text kills it?


Indeed, the font is terrible and it would look better of you took the text and lines out completely.
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Fuzzy_Fz wrote 2/10

problem:
transparent BG
the image itself is just a render
There is no focal point
Cant see what you are trying to accomplish

Fixing:
Give it a purpose
Select a certain theme
New colors
Fill the background

-Fuzzy[/u]
ouch thanks for the crit though bro this way my first attempt at somthing involving an abstract art so im not use'd to making this
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Hobbyist wrote
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Hobbyist wrote The text and background kills it.

im cunfused are you saying the text kills it?


Indeed, the font is terrible and it would look better of you took the text and lines out completely.
http://gyazo.com/e391e31c61c903cf8537936c54449ae7
is this better to u sir?
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I like the concept of it, but it just wasn't executed very well. The Space and Stairway stocks seem very low quality and faded. Lastly, I don't like the pattern used in the background, the triangles are too small.
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