I like the Borderlands Render.

It looks clean I give it a 9/10

Good Job

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The lost planet sig doesn't have too much to it.

It looks rather boring.

you did a good job on the render though, too much open space if you ask me.

7/10

Wow. This is amazing! No flaws, according to my eye.

Ill break my feedback in half to talk about each work

borderlands:
It is quite appealing, but much going on. You could have probably added some more effects, a C4D, anything really just to spice it up a little. Also, the duplicated render to the right of the original is a bit unnecessary since you have one to the left of the render. Lastly I would say add just a little more blue into the background, the light blue on grey/black is kinda ugly :/

lost planet:
To start, again, the 2 duplicated renders seems a bit unnecessary, but it looks better in this one than the borderlands one. The text could be moved over to the left slightly as the white on the render is conflicting with the white text. Also, again, add some more stuff into these to spice them up!

Overall, pretty good work, could have more going on, but they're ok, for now ;)

I like the text but not the renders and the duplicated backgrounds need to be lowered in opacity...