Exceed wrote

I dont do forum sigs so i thought this was good for me tell me what i can add

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You spelt it wrong, its locust. Plus, i cant really give judgement on the image as i only really do clean,sleek and sharp images.

nice 8/10

btw how do u make the background

Flak wrote

Exceed wrote

I dont do forum sigs so i thought this was good for me tell me what i can add

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You spelt it wrong, its locust. Plus, i cant really give judgement on the image as i only really do clean,sleek and sharp images.

i smell a cocky person

-Graffiti- wrote nice 8/10

btw how do u make the background

u duplicate the render spread abou the screen and then ripple then distort them

mehh....

The smudging is attrocious and looks terrible.

the ripple effect is to noticable and should be as a subtle texture.....and in this case looks bad.

try adding some effects and C4D's to fill up the "Empty" room in this piece.

maybe lower the opacity a tad on the text also. ;)

Keep practicing and you will get better

Katelee wrote mehh....

The smudging is attrocious and looks terrible.

the ripple effect is to noticable and should be as a subtle texture.....and in this case looks bad.

try adding some effects and C4D's to fill up the "Empty" room in this piece.

maybe lower the opacity a tad on the text also. ;)

Keep practicing and you will get better

thanks but what u mean effects

Exceed wrote

Katelee wrote mehh....

The smudging is attrocious and looks terrible.

the ripple effect is to noticable and should be as a subtle texture.....and in this case looks bad.

try adding some effects and C4D's to fill up the "Empty" room in this piece.

maybe lower the opacity a tad on the text also. ;)

Keep practicing and you will get better

thanks but what u mean effects

like gradients,c4d's,curves,and other things in the adjustments panel ;)

Flak wrote

Exceed wrote

I dont do forum sigs so i thought this was good for me tell me what i can add

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You spelt it wrong, its locust. Plus, i cant really give judgement on the image as i only really do clean,sleek and sharp images.

Wow how big headed are you you **** grow up you may be better who cares help him with critiscm this is why i hate TTG is because of people like you ***

You need to learn techniques.

The ripple thing you got going on is horrendous.

Try for subtle blending.

Colour and lighting could do with a look at aswell.

If you must put text in there then at least make it fit with the image.