Really good yeah! I think previous comments about the Font said it all

MrBear wrote Really good yeah! I think previous comments about the Font said it all

okay thanks for the comment, and yes the text not too great, have mentioned that

Optimist wrote gonna bump, would like more comments

A little advice about bumping topics. Try not to bump your topic too much like if you have two posts underneath each other asking for more rates it just makes you look bad but then again you are asking for the real feedback.

To avoid this just delete the last bump and re bump it again. Basically there is a picture of an X on the far right side which is delete this post. It will dissapear if someone has a post underneath your other post. It should look like this. Use advice to help you next time you want to bump something.

"Only delete and re bump 30 minutes to an hour after you the topic to get more viewers and hopefully comments"

Do not bump topics from a day ago because this classes as grave digging and is a high warning.

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Back to topic, the smudging is very nice and the colour is perfect also in my eyes.

The text is getting better but the white sticks out too much, try using a clipping mask to make a good effect and hopefully the text wont be a focal point.

The lighting bit on his head delete a bit of that and blur it into the background. I think that make it look better.

Heres a thumbs up I dont rate now, too mainstream :thumbsup:

Zekrom wrote

Optimist wrote gonna bump, would like more comments

A little advice about bumping topics. Try not to bump your topic too much like if you have two posts underneath each other asking for more rates it just makes you look bad but then again you are asking for the real feedback.

To avoid this just delete the last bump and re bump it again. Basically there is a picture of an X on the far right side which is delete this post. It will dissapear if someone has a post underneath your other post. It should look like this. Use advice to help you next time you want to bump something.

"Only delete and re bump 30 minutes to an hour after you the topic to get more viewers and hopefully comments"

Do not bump topics from a day ago because this classes as grave digging and is a high warning.

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Back to topic, the smudging is very nice and the colour is perfect also in my eyes.

The text is getting better but the white sticks out too much, try using a clipping mask to make a good effect and hopefully the text wont be a focal point.

The lighting bit on his head delete a bit of that and blur it into the background. I think that make it look better.

Heres a thumbs up I dont rate now, too mainstream :thumbsup:

oh okay i didn't realize about the bumping, thanks zekrom and thanks for the comments on the sig

Honestly not a fan of this one. Its seems like alot of smudging that looks like one thing of smoke, idk. And TGH, it looks like the inside of a Wobm D: