Well, I'm a fairly new commentator and I just started getting into this. The other day, I posted my very first commentary and today I just posted my very first live commentary. I would deeply appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback, how I can approve, constructive criticism, and other beneficial things that can help my channel grow. I know there may be haters, but please, I'm new and only 14 years old and I would appreciate it if you told me what is wrong with my video. Thanks, I truly appreciate it

A few more things: What kind of videos do you guys think I should make (like a series, tutorials, etc.), and what other games would you like to see me post?

Request: If you subscribe, please be active (comment, rate, etc.)

My Channel: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

First Ever Commentary (1st Video): [youtube]http://t.co/Jl1kmpf[/youtube]

Live Commentary (2nd Video): [youtube]http://t.co/GjUHlve[/youtube]