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#51. Posted:
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HaVoKxWreckz wrote Fallout 3 Rap:


Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there

I'll tell you how i became the fresh Prince of Utah
In West new reno born and raised
In the shark club is where i spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shootin some Mole rats outside of the school
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Trying to recruit me to their brotherhood
he almost signed up But my mom got scared
She said 'You're Signin' up with your uncle in the NCR'

I Waited for the truck and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say that Thing is rare
But He thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Boot Camp'

I got bored after a few months about 7 or 8
Untill i yelled to the Instructor 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my papers
I was finally Free
To wander the wastes no longer a draftee!


What is the point of this rap,
Didnt you read the post, nah, inside your head theres a gap,
Boy you based your rap,
off of a game that can barely open the cap,
to my bottle,
while my raps are full throttle,
Im making this crap up as I go along,
While you read your from a video game song,
You cant make your point in a rap,
Because your just plain crap.
#52. Posted:
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RedPlaydoh wrote
HaVoKxWreckz wrote Fallout 3 Rap:


Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there

I'll tell you how i became the fresh Prince of Utah
In West new reno born and raised
In the shark club is where i spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shootin some Mole rats outside of the school
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Trying to recruit me to their brotherhood
he almost signed up But my mom got scared
She said 'You're Signin' up with your uncle in the NCR'

I Waited for the truck and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say that Thing is rare
But He thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Boot Camp'

I got bored after a few months about 7 or 8
Untill i yelled to the Instructor 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my papers
I was finally Free
To wander the wastes no longer a draftee!


What is the point of this rap,
Didnt you read the post, nah, inside your head theres a gap,
Boy you based your rap,
off of a game that can barely open the cap,
to my bottle,
while my raps are full throttle,
Im making this crap up as I go along,
While you read your from a video game song,
You cant make your point in a rap,
Because your just plain crap.


That was awesome! I tip my hat to you sir!
#53. Posted:
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Look at the newbies,
Tryna beat cool-beats,
I slammed, I don't just do-me,
Too bad you fell before yuh girl blew me,
I rap out like a doobie,
I get autographs, you say "who-me?"

I go mean like the world's on my shoulders,
Look out th' window, see some h*es,
say "let me hold hers!"
It's been three weeks bro, at least change yuh clothes!

People blow through three packs,
while I'm still countin stacks,
Racks on Racks,

I sing it to yuh girl, yuh mom, yuh whole family,
Rap against the world, but the world can't beat-me...
#54. Posted:
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Wanna-Race wrote Look at the newbies,
Tryna beat cool-beats,
I slammed, I don't just do-me,
Too bad you fell before yuh girl blew me,
I rap out like a doobie,
I get autographs, you say "who-me?"

I go mean like the world's on my shoulders,
Look out th' window, see some h*es,
say "let me hold hers!"
It's been three weeks bro, at least change yuh clothes!

People blow through three packs,
while I'm still countin stacks,
Racks on Racks,

I sing it to yuh girl, yuh mom, yuh whole family,
Rap against the world, but the world can't beat-me...

Your name is Wanna-Race,
too bad you're not in first place.
You're nothing but a disgrace.
Shut up before I rape face.
I'll destroy you,
not my fault McDonalds will not employ you.
I'm so sick they call me influenza.
The master with or without a pen or pencil.
You cannot copy me, I am not a stencil.
Think you're cool, you're just room temperature.
Gotta understand that truthfully I'm pimpin' sir.
Now, please, apologize.
Then drop some weight from your thighs.

- Fad
#55. Posted:
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TTG-Robin wrote
Onlycoolguyher wrote
TTG-Robin wrote This kid above can't spell for his life
While my rhymes so sharp they cut you like a knife
That's right
You can't even put up a fight
Yeah, your probably cryin to your mommy
Hold up, I'm not done with you, Tommy
You say your the only cool guy here
But I'm lookin in your eyes and they are filled with fear
So go take a break, you'll need one
Come back win your ready for a fight, son.

Aight, ill give you some cred,

you actually wrote more than a sentence,
but check this,
you dont know me,
my name aint tommy,
i guess you wanted to try me,
well ill shoot an arrow,
right through your hood,
cuz you might be robin,
but im batman,
your my sidekick,
i teach you the tricks,
but we can sit here and make fun of names all day long,
but youll end up being the b*tch to wet his thong,
and the only reason i have fear in my eyes,
is cuz im scared to see if you might embarrass yourself,
so go ahead and check yo self b4 you reck yo self,
and come back and see me,
after you come back down from that tree.
oh and one more thing,
i aint your son,
and i never will be.

Alright, I see how it is
You tryin to get into the rap pin biz
But Imma try and be short and sweet
My rap so good you can call it 1337
Your rap so long it makes me go to sleep
And I wake up about to weep
Cuz hearin some ameatur rap is sad
Might wanna improve your rhymes, cuz they bad.

Why be short and sweet,
you got nothin to say,
all you did was a tweet,
so go back to twitter,
cuz your rhymes aint gettin any better,
theyre actually getting bitter,
your about to become a quitter.
are these rhymes good enough for you,
or are you going to write another short paragraph,
just to waste my time with you,
to be honest... i think your done for,
unless you can come up with a good rhyme to beat my score,
but this is impossible,
implausible,
and unthinkable,
so go ahead and think twice,
b4 u step into a sink hole.
#56. Posted:
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You say my rhymes are bitter,
While yours are like litter
All over the place and unwanted
You say I'm done, but your the one being hunted
I'm stalkin you through the woods just waiting for you to slip
For when you do, I'll unleash a full clip
I'm done for now
So wipe of your brow
Cuz the threat is gone for now
But post again and I might just snap
Come back with your rap.
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TTG-Robin wrote You say my rhymes are bitter,
While yours are like litter
All over the place and unwanted
You say I'm done, but your the one being hunted
I'm stalkin you through the woods just waiting for you to slip
For when you do, I'll unleash a full clip
I'm done for now
So wipe of your brow

Cuz the threat is gone for now
But post again and I might just snap
Come back with your rap.
Son this is just another
high rap about u smokin
lou but u be smokin
reggie do know how
i know cuz ur ****
always tryin to sell
me ur reggie cuz u
to p-u-s-s-y to be
puttin work on the
streets like me
im that type cuban
that sells anything
fo a dollar and up
but i change that dolla
to a thou n-i-g-g-a
#58. Posted:
Scribble
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oDrizzYo_M16 wrote
TTG-Robin wrote You say my rhymes are bitter,
While yours are like litter
All over the place and unwanted
You say I'm done, but your the one being hunted
I'm stalkin you through the woods just waiting for you to slip
For when you do, I'll unleash a full clip
I'm done for now
So wipe of your brow

Cuz the threat is gone for now
But post again and I might just snap
Come back with your rap.
Son this is just another
high rap about u smokin
lou but u be smokin
reggie do know how
i know cuz ur ****
always tryin to sell
me ur reggie cuz u
to p-u-s-s-y to be
puttin work on the
streets like me
im that type cuban
that sells anything
fo a dollar and up
but i change that dolla
to a thou n-i-g-g-a

m16 ya pr!ck
Go to NG ( NEXT GEN ) CUZ U suck d!ck b!tch
You follow ped0 bear on twitter
did i mention your a rage quitter n-gger
Faggy little sp!ck with a nepolean d!ck
Stick to god dam gogos
U hom0
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SRRY FOR THE HARSH WORDS
#59. Posted:
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[quote="Airsoft-"]
oDrizzYo_M16 wrote
TTG-Robin wrote You say my rhymes are bitter,
While yours are like litter
All over the place and unwanted
You say I'm done, but your the one being hunted
I'm stalkin you through the woods just waiting for you to slip
For when you do, I'll unleash a full clip
I'm done for now
So wipe of your brow

Cuz the threat is gone for now
But post again and I might just snap
Come back with your rap.
Son this is just another
high rap about u smokin
lou but u be smokin
reggie do know how
i know cuz ur ****
always tryin to sell
me ur reggie cuz u
to p-u-s-s-y to be
puttin work on the
streets like me
im that type cuban
that sells anything
fo a dollar and up
but i change that dolla
to a thou n-i-g-g-a

m16 ya pr!ck
Go to NG ( NEXT GEN ) CUZ U suck d!ck b!tch
You follow ped0 bear on twitter
did i mention your a rage quitter n-gger
Faggy little sp!ck with a nepolean d!ck
Stick to god dam gogos
U hom0
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SRRY FOR THE HARSH WORDS[/quote

Ur name airsoft so claim
to got guns but ur guns
faker than nicki ass'n'tits
no wonder ur name soft because
u softer than the sheets i sleep on
go back to ur fake ass rappers
u look up to learn how to spitt
more than 7 bars airpussy
#60. Posted:
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So, Lets listen to all theese 10 year old kids who can't rapp, All they do is spit out words, acting like they slurr the words. I all i hear is "Crap, you cant rap , I just F'ed you mom" Well kids, Stay in school, because my lil brother can rap betta then you, All of yall havent even seen crack, weed, so dont rap bout it. I failed in school cuz some of the teacher neva believed in me, My parents were concieved but they also never beleived in me, There was only 1 time i could see me smile, and that was when i left them, i was runnin a mile. I made some bad choices in life, Rap aint about rhymes, its about how you spit it. Most rappers theese days talk about all da **** they have, as of the unknown rapper spitting raps, rapping about how he got off drugs, how he was beat as a kid, how is life is now. Set an example when you rap, just dont spit out out some slurred words you think that is good, but when you havent seen nothing yet, Dont rap!
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