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hey guys, this took me like half an hour, i know its crap but anyway please rate it out of 100.

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Since you just want a rating, 43, and that's being nice :/
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dude2410 wrote Since you just want a rating, 43, and that's being nice :/


thanks and please could you leave some feed back ;)
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And some ways to improve my work.
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98 out of 100, i like the swirls and its looks amazing!
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90 out of 100
the colors look amazing
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austion2716 wrote 90 out of 100
the colors look amazing


thanks bro, you got any feedback for me?.
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wow, very detailed, but a bit too simple so about 75/100.
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Count wrote wow, very detailed, but a bit too simple so about 75/100.


cheers man, you got any feedback for me to improve?
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dude2410 wrote Since you just want a rating, 43, and that's being nice :/


thanks and please could you leave some feed back ;)


Ok, I wasn't sure if you were looking for feedback.
Well to start, the render doesn't fit the theme at all, a cod character with a technology/engineering background? Keep a steady theme, for a render like this war or some other battle would be a good theme. Also, the swirls are very bad here, they serve no purpose of attracting attention and aren't even shaded correctly. Onto colors, your colors are all over the place. Keep a color scheme. Matching 2 or three good colors and then mixing some lights and darks in is great, but here you just kinda took a whole bunch of colors and mashed them together, it worked to bring attention off the background and towards the render, but the colors just don't match at all. Overall, just learn to try to stick with a theme and to match your colors. It's really the very basis of being an artist. Hope to see you improve.
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