iPhone-4 wrote yea bro it looks great on my desktop

Exactly which one did you put as your desktop?

I think the second one looks worse than the first.
Adding text and a boarder is not something to be proud about also the lines that moved we probably moved with the liquid tool or smudge tool... also the effect you put in the background makes it look very cheesy and you can't focus on the main render( in this case that flower looking thing) and even then the render is way to bright to even see anything!

For an edit i would give you a 2/10 1point for adding text another for the boarder.

no need to post these.. sorry i might be little harsh but "shitty" photoshops when the 100% of the picture is not yours and the edit youve made can be done in literally 2minutes.

0/10