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Life is like a cig
It's something some people love and some people hate
But when it's over some people are sad and others are happy
Some people think they can just get another one out of their box
But it will not be as good as the last one
You should be happy when the smoke is over because it was a good one
Don't be sad about other people's cig be happy because it was a good smoke.
I just came up with it it's about life and death
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It's something some people love and some people hate
But when it's over some people are sad and others are happy
Some people think they can just get another one out of their box
But it will not be as good as the last one
You should be happy when the smoke is over because it was a good one
Don't be sad about other people's cig be happy because it was a good smoke.
I just came up with it it's about life and death
Feedback?
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lol 1-10
i ddint even read it Just saw on the title it was a poem
i ddint even read it Just saw on the title it was a poem
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not bad it has a meaning to it so 8/10!
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Inb4ThisIsNotFacebook....
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7/10 i guess idk
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Thanks for the feedback. I hate poems too I just thought it sounded cool.
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I really like it 10/10
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