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Rate my first 2 intros (Cinema 4D)
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Can you guys rate these two Intros I made.
They are the first 2 i have ever made.
Made with Cinema 4D

Both are here on my Youtube
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Pretty sure this is a template, but if its not anyway, the studio all looks awful and the light shouldn't show like that. Keep working on materials, like reflection, and maybe look up some tuts.
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MLK wrote Pretty sure this is a template, but if its not anyway, the studio all looks awful and the light shouldn't show like that. Keep working on materials, like reflection, and maybe look up some tuts.

not a template btw why would i care what you think about that
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MLK wrote Pretty sure this is a template, but if its not anyway, the studio all looks awful and the light shouldn't show like that. Keep working on materials, like reflection, and maybe look up some tuts.

not a template btw why would i care what you think about that
He may not have rated it, but he gave you constructive criticism which should help you get better with what your doing. Sure his approach may have been off, but your asking us to rate them, and personally I'd rate them 2/10.
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Don't use the Hi-8 Lense it ruins the whole intro
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not the best I've seen but its alright.
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Its ok but its prob a template
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They are decent man keep practicing though!
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ok i wont use the hi-8 light anymore
They arent templates though
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