Any Feedback? doesnt matter good or bad just let me know

id say find a faster beat and just get flowin let it all out don hold back, dont worry about rhymes so much just words that flow.

Use near rhymes and change up the pronunciation of words to your advantage.


I started writing/rapping a few months ago and i was god awful, but i write and rap atleast one verse every day and i have finally got the hang of it and found my main flow.

Its hard work but super fun, once you find your flow and ge your writing down your golden.


Also stay underground dont fall into this hollywood garbage no need to rap about girls and money if you keep it real you will build more fans.


All and all good stuff keep workin at your passion!

Like Nitrogen said it does need to be a little bit faster but I liked it.
You should do more Ill subscribe

Nitrogen wrote Also stay underground dont fall into this hollywood garbage no need to rap about girls and money if you keep it real you will build more fans.

This is the #1 tip for al new artists.
Thanks for pointing it out.

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like said before, just speed it up a little, U've got potential, don't waste it ;)

ahah sounds like a gay dude rapping no joke you asked for feed back im giving you what i hear sorry you may not want to here it but its true

you should really consider using autotune

SmoothShooting wrote you should really consider using autotune

Why so he can be classed as another illumanati puppet?

Or he could work hard find his flow and tone and actually have potential. It takes time!!! You will not just grab a mic and be ill, remember the better the lyrics roll off your tongue the better your flow will be

Hey thanks for all the feedback guys really appreciate it,
And yeah I will for sure work on my flow and lyrics, thanks for that