Yo guys, I'm planning on recording this. Could you tell me how well written this is? 1-10
Here's the beat:
Here's the verse:

[Intro] Yo. Yo. Alright let's get this going. Drop.
[Verse] So first off I spit for HKD
Hate Kill Destroy,
for the illmatic notoriety,
I'm sick of society
Music is bland
there's no variety
till I step in
time to put a spin on what you call "rap"
yall deserve a slap
saying lyrics don't matter
there's nothing sadder than lil wayne and a shitty beat
**** YOUNG MONEY
yeah, I said is sonny
I keep it real
I aint no Easter bunny
it's funny
how we've got this pushover rap
but I deserve a clap
standing up to this crap,
I fap fap on it
stop it,
what I spit is ill,
I'm speakin for real
time to bring back raps that kill
while those idiots sit back to their **** dub step
I'm on that sit rep
Bringing back Slim Shady 2pac and Biggie and Hip Hop back for real
ya feel?