Ottway wrote

Greynade wrote Pretty sloppy tbh. 5/10.

Sorry But How Is This Sloppy?

Has Good Rhythm In My opinion. I Guess Some People Just Don't Have The Right Idea On How To Give Feedback.

Give Some reasons Why Next time Idiot.

Excuse me for rating and not giving cnc, I must have missed that part in the op and the thread title :rolleyes:

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Sense you asked so nicely, heres some feedback,

Red: What is the faded red stuff? It has no purpose being there, and it makes the piece seem, you guessed it, sloppy.

Green: The fog is poorly implemented, and you desatured the shit out of random parts of the image behind the fog.

Blue: Did you resize the image and turn down the opacity on it? if so, dont do that. It rarely looks good. It just seems random in your composition.

Yellow: I plain just dont like the fact that you only made half of it, then just duplicated and flipped horizontally, then put a logo on top.


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Side note: do you just roll a dice to see which words will start with an uppercase letter when you type?

Greynade wrote

Ottway wrote

Greynade wrote Pretty sloppy tbh. 5/10.

Sorry But How Is This Sloppy?

Has Good Rhythm In My opinion. I Guess Some People Just Don't Have The Right Idea On How To Give Feedback.

Give Some reasons Why Next time Idiot.

Excuse me for rating and not giving cnc, I must have missed that part in the op and the thread title :rolleyes:

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Sense you asked so nicely, heres some feedback,

Red: What is the faded red stuff? It has no purpose being there, and it makes the piece seem, you guessed it, sloppy.

Green: The fog is poorly implemented, and you desatured the **** out of random parts of the image behind the fog.

Blue: Did you resize the image and turn down the opacity on it? if so, dont do that. It rarely looks good. It just seems random in your composition.

Yellow: I plain just dont like the fact that you only made half of it, then just duplicated and flipped horizontally, then put a logo on top.


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Side note: do you just roll a dice to see which words will start with an uppercase letter when you type?

Ok Thank You, Now Let me Explain.

<3 Red: That Random Red Stuff Wat Mixed With the Fog... I Can't Remove it. So There You Go. So Stop being A You Guessed It... A Smart-A.s.s

<3 Green: Random Images What Are You Talking About? Thats The DeviantArt Logo Which I Posted It On Thats Why It's There.

<3 Blue: Yes, Thats My Style Its Barely noticeable And It Adds To The Background So Hop Off.

<3 Yellow: Yes It Has Equality, I Am A Very OCD Person Everything Has To be Equal To me And Is Shown Through Many Things I Do Such As You Guessed It... My Graphics.

Side Note: No Again I Have Very Bad OCD Every Letter Is Capped But Occasionally I Miss Shift And Dont Spend Time To Change It <3.

Thanks For The Feedback Buddy Although Your A Little To Harsh And Pretty Slow On Understanding Everyone Has There Style.

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<3 Red: That Random Red Stuff Wat Mixed With the Fog... I Can't Remove it. So There You Go. So Stop being A You Guessed It... A Smart-A.s.s

Yes you can...

[quote]<3 Green: Random Images What Are You Talking About? Thats The DeviantArt Logo Which I Posted It On Thats Why It's There.[?quote]

Not images plural, image, as in singular. You desaturated the green parts way to much.

<3 Blue: Yes, Thats My Style Its Barely noticeable And It Adds To The Background So Hop Off.

I disagree 100%. It just makes the image seem sloppy. I understand it can look good, but only in very few situations.

<3 Yellow: Yes It Has Equality, I Am A Very OCD Person Everything Has To be Equal To me And Is Shown Through Many Things I Do Such As You Guessed It... My Graphics.

Symmetry can be good, but the eye is naturally programmed to find variance. Your image loses alot of potential when you do this.

Thanks For The Feedback Buddy Although Your A Little To Harsh And Pretty Slow On Understanding Everyone Has There Style.

I understand that people have they're styles, but styles can be improved. Then again, what do I know? I'm just a freshblood on the graphics scale, and your are intermediate.

I like version 2 the best

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Ottway wrote



<3 Red: That Random Red Stuff Wat Mixed With the Fog... I Can't Remove it. So There You Go. So Stop being A You Guessed It... A Smart-A.s.s

Yes you can...

<3 Green: Random Images What Are You Talking About? Thats The DeviantArt Logo Which I Posted It On Thats Why It's There.[?quote]

Not images plural, image, as in singular. You desaturated the green parts way to much.

<3 Blue: Yes, Thats My Style Its Barely noticeable And It Adds To The Background So Hop Off.

I disagree 100%. It just makes the image seem sloppy. I understand it can look good, but only in very few situations.

<3 Yellow: Yes It Has Equality, I Am A Very OCD Person Everything Has To be Equal To me And Is Shown Through Many Things I Do Such As You Guessed It... My Graphics.

Symmetry can be good, but the eye is naturally programmed to find variance. Your image loses alot of potential when you do this.

Thanks For The Feedback Buddy Although Your A Little To Harsh And Pretty Slow On Understanding Everyone Has There Style.

I understand that people have they're styles, but styles can be improved. Then again, what do I know? I'm just a freshblood on the graphics scale, and your are intermediate.

You Can Argue With me Here All You Want Im Just Saying I Have My Style I Like Equality, Look At Any Of My Art It's All Equal. Im not Arguing With You because You Say your A Fresh Blood? Im Not Stupid Thats An Image And Everyone Judges Thereselves Differently, You Could be God At Graphics But Think A lot Of People Are Better Then You So You Think Your A "Fresh Blood".

So Look I Appreciate Your Feedback ill Work On It But Lets Both Agree Here Your Just Being An A.s.s Because I Called You An Idiot, Which I Do Apologize For It.

And On A Note I know I Could Remove The Red But I Looks Unatural To Rigged. Thats Why I Don't. And Improve Your Style Not Really You Can Change It But Not Really Improve.

10/10! Good S**T Bro. Keep It Up

v4 looks pretty nice 7/10

Ottway wrote

You Can Argue With me Here All You Want Im Just Saying I Have My Style I Like Equality, Look At Any Of My Art It's All Equal. Im not Arguing With You because You Say your A Fresh Blood? Im Not Stupid Thats An Image And Everyone Judges Thereselves Differently, You Could be God At Graphics But Think A lot Of People Are Better Then You So You Think Your A "Fresh Blood".

So Look I Appreciate Your Feedback ill Work On It But Lets Both Agree Here Your Just Being An A.s.s Because I Called You An Idiot, Which I Do Apologize For It.

And On A Note I know I Could Remove The Red But I Looks Unatural To Rigged. Thats Why I Don't. And Improve Your Style Not Really You Can Change It But Not Really Improve.

How am I being an ass? I rated the image. Then you asked for feedback, and I responded. I'm just trying to give you some feedback to help you get better at graphics.

Racist wrote v4 looks pretty nice 7/10

Thanks! I Like v4 Te Most Also, It Was My Final Image

Greynade wrote

Ottway wrote

You Can Argue With me Here All You Want Im Just Saying I Have My Style I Like Equality, Look At Any Of My Art It's All Equal. Im not Arguing With You because You Say your A Fresh Blood? Im Not Stupid Thats An Image And Everyone Judges Thereselves Differently, You Could be God At Graphics But Think A lot Of People Are Better Then You So You Think Your A "Fresh Blood".

So Look I Appreciate Your Feedback ill Work On It But Lets Both Agree Here Your Just Being An A.s.s Because I Called You An Idiot, Which I Do Apologize For It.

And On A Note I know I Could Remove The Red But I Looks Unatural To Rigged. Thats Why I Don't. And Improve Your Style Not Really You Can Change It But Not Really Improve.

How am I being an ass? I rated the image. Then you asked for feedback, and I responded. I'm just trying to give you some feedback to help you get better at graphics.

Im Pretty Sure We Can Both Agree You Were Being A Bit Of A Smart A.s.s And You You Also Commented On My OCD Which Pissed me Of. It's Done Though Thanks For The feedback