Oh ok so anything that willl help me?

Ok so this is a basic piece (your a beginner so thats expected), try going to the graphics resource section and downloading a graphics pack, they help A LOT, take some tutorials to make sure you know how to use all the tools correctly and filters etc. Then once you get the graphics pack knowing how to set something to overlay/linear dodge etc. will help and make sure you can lower opacity. For this piece I would start off with font placement, it should almost always be horizontal and not nearly that big unless you are making a desktop BG (not sure if this is or not) also try finding some new fonts off dafont.com just look around and you'll find some nice ones, I like OptimusPrincepsBold, Robotica, Ethnocentric, Praetorian and some others. The render is pretty choppy, a lot of good renders are at planetrenders.net so you can check some out there, also as for render placement I usually put mine somewhere closer to the middle but it's all really up to you. Final thing I'm going to talk about is your tag at the bottom, personally I would just put your name in a low opacity white font (maybe a little bigger) but I've seen a lot of different tags by a lot of different people. If you have any questions on anything PM me. Sorry for solid block of text to all of you who went through and read this

Thats amazing for you starting out!
Good job! aa)

9/10 is super good and u stared last week wow

Thanks for your feedback guys and x3ternal i will try and do that

Kamikxze wrote Thanks for your feedback guys and x3ternal i will try and do that

Check out my ultimate resource thread in the graphics resources section.