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I started to right this book a couple of minuets ago. This is what I got so far. Tell me if its good and griping ( makes you want to keep reading ). Also I have not spell checked it yet. So no hate please. This is my first book and im extreamly bored. Please leave feedback. I will rep 100
"Choose a door" a voice said impatiently. This is it, the final stage. After all six stages this is the end. Relief fills my thoughts, But the man continues. " Behind one door lies life, behind the other lies death. Choose wisely. You have sixty seconds." And with that the voice is gone. The sound of footsteps walking away fill my ears. The the clock begins. Tick. Tick. Tick. Choose wisely I thought. In front of me lies two rusty old metallic looking doors. Around me is nothing but darkness and a bright light. Bright enough to make me turn away. Must be the Bargains I thought. The clock is ticking. I must make my decision quickly. My body still soar and stiff from the previous stages I slowly walk forward. A million different images flashing through my mind right now. I walk until I am nearly nose to nose with the rusty door. On each of the doors labels A and B are on the center of the door along with the logo of the Bargains painted in thick coat of red paint which seems to have a strong salty smell to it. Blood. I take one last look at the bright light which make me squint. With the smell of death in the air. Tick. Tick. Tick. I take a step toward door with the label A. I place my hand out to the handle of the freezing cold door. I push the door with the last of my strength and a loud screeching sound follows. With darkness swallowing me, I take one last deep breath and walk into the unknown.

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haha Its Pretty Nice 9.5/10


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SureCydia wrote haha It Pretty Nice 9.5/10
There is no way you read it that fast.
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Im am not just posting for the rep like other leechers but i really do think you have something so far. I felt hooked into it by the third sentence, i recommend you write some more.
this is really enjoyable. :coffee:

EDIT: 9/10


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Motto: The FN sing a song like it's the leader of a soul group.
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Motto: The FN sing a song like it's the leader of a soul group.
I dont really read alot but its ok
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OMG best book ever!!??! 10/10 man this is going to be a great book!
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Pod wrote
SureCydia wrote haha It Pretty Nice 9.5/10
There is no way you read it that fast.

Yes I did ADHD IN ACTION
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Wow that made me want to keep reading great job!
9.8/10
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Publish it, and send me a free copy ;)
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read the first 2 lines, got bored. nuff nuff jiggly puff
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