Ehh, not one of my favorites. I think it i way over sharpened and the render isn't really blended in you know? Not sure where you want the light source to be, because I see a red light source in the top left but he is facing the top right and that is where the light source should be. It is a nice try KIU

vGucciZ wrote Ehh, not one of my favorites. I think it i way over sharpened and the render isn't really blended in you know? Not sure where you want the light source to be, because I see a red light source in the top left but he is facing the top right and that is where the light source should be. It is a nice try KIU

I'm just learning plus im not feeling well i thought my dad was my cousin earlier

Oh its understandable. Learning is good, and so is listening and taking the feedback to mind. If you just blow it off then you may or may not get better. Not saying I am right, just saying that, this is what I would do to improve on it.

vGucciZ wrote Oh its understandable. Learning is good, and so is listening and taking the feedback to mind. If you just blow it off then you may or may not get better. Not saying I am right, just saying that, this is what I would do to improve on it.

Any better had to take out text to remove the light source :| [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Your are right by the way thats why i tried what you said

I would've moved the light source to the left a bit more and cleaned up the back side of the lighting on the render. If you look at it he is looking at like a 45 degree. But it is better. Also Try to use a 1px border or if you like the thicker borders don't do them on all 4 sides. Do them on 2 sides. But this is a bit better KIU