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Just made my first commentary, need feedback
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Just made my first commentary, need feedback Posted:

xSebban
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This is the link to my channel: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] that is the commentary.

I need feedback on what I can do better, what was bad and what I can improve for my next commentary.

Cheers
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x9Torres
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you should of just kept on going even when you got negative feedback cause you would of been better now, but thats your first one and it seems alright, can hear your voice over the gameplay, you kept talking all the way through it so id say you done well for your first one.
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