I like the dubstep version of that Gotye song, not a bad choice.

The cinematics are a little bland, it would be good to have a running player with a camera following behind him, it would have looked a bit cooler and had more of a buildup to the climax.

That screen wipe sync at the beginning is well synced until the BPM picked up, it got a little sloppy then. I liked the hitbox effect, where you replaced the model of the enemy with a red silhouette, but the effects after it were a little unnecessary in my opinion.

For your first "real OCE," I would give it a 7.5/10.

RaitoKunRyuk wrote I like the dubstep version of that Gotye song, not a bad choice.

The cinematics are a little bland, it would be good to have a running player with a camera following behind him, it would have looked a bit cooler and had more of a buildup to the climax.

That screen wipe sync at the beginning is well synced until the BPM picked up, it got a little sloppy then. I liked the hitbox effect, where you replaced the model of the enemy with a red silhouette, but the effects after it were a little unnecessary in my opinion.

For your first "real OCE," I would give it a 7.5/10.

thanks for that.

Nice bro,

I like it,

Rate:8/10

Inverse wrote Nice bro,

I like it,

Rate:8/10

thnak you inverse

dubstep never gets old in oce's
and like Raito said the cinematics were a little bland and something better could be done with it. you could have had more things going on just as the song reaches andwhen hes about to shoot also i would add one of those epic farting bass booms as he shoots and the screen all moves n stuff


but at thee minute it is ok to say its your first real edit so i rate it a 7/10

Nice will give a 8/10 im just starting editing will put my pone up soon.

RaitoKunRyuk wrote I like the dubstep version of that Gotye song, not a bad choice.

The cinematics are a little bland, it would be good to have a running player with a camera following behind him, it would have looked a bit cooler and had more of a buildup to the climax.

That screen wipe sync at the beginning is well synced until the BPM picked up, it got a little sloppy then. I liked the hitbox effect, where you replaced the model of the enemy with a red silhouette, but the effects after it were a little unnecessary in my opinion.

For your first "real OCE," I would give it a 7.5/10.

I agree 100% with this. And the better the clip, the better the OCE can be, so, if you were to have say a 8 man feed instead of this, I would have given it like a 8.5. But the thing showing you editing at the very end kinda ruined it for me.

Great job though! Keep trying and you'll get a lot better, that's how these things work. Don't ever give up because someone saying you're bad, not good enough etc. Just believe in yourself and good things will happen.