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Perverse
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this is my first pen-tooled Tag

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Loving the waves bro...

Looks good overall.

7/10
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Inkz wrote Loving the waves bro...

Looks good overall.

7/10


is there anything i should add because in my opinion it looks empty
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no dont add anything it looks clean and if u do it will most likely ruin the flow of this piece
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maybe add more smaller waves to make look like a tunnel
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Zarek wrote no dont add anything it looks clean and if u do it will most likely ruin the flow of this piece


alright thanks for the Feedback!
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I like the colors along with the way it looks.
7.5/10
Nice Work.

-BF3
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Battlefield_3 wrote
I like the colors along with the way it looks.
7.5/10
Nice Work.

-BF3


thanks for the rate, the only color scheme that looked good to me, idk if i should add more different colors to it
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Nice-Clean- and simple nicely done!
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Nice and clean dude

Some pretty nice curves aswell.

Just some tips on improving:

It looks abit empty but if you add another solid object to it, it wont look right, so maybe add some more waves or something.

The text in my opinion is horrible, i hate that curly type font,

also, some of the bottom wave line is very rough. try smoothing that out.

lastly, i noticed theres a little gap near the top of the waves between the 2nd and 3rd one.

maybe fix that.

other than that, nice and clean pal

keep it up
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