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Zewse
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well for starters if your just going to comment a rate and put something like 'very good' don't. I want to know what i can do better, so feel free to comment what i can improve on and rate it.
v1
http://i.imgur.com/xYfEW.jpg
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v2 (added blur)
http://i.imgur.com/uJaEr.jpg
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what it looks like on my bg
http://ttgdime.com/dimegrab/images/1583c3.png
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v3 (extra detail)
http://i.imgur.com/Vsq1B.jpg
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#2. Posted:
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thats really sick i would give you some tips and stuff but i dont really know to much about gfx and i think it looks sick how it is
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Looks good!
Could decrease the glow a bit on the top and bottom, also i think maybey a bit of a blur would add to the grimy background, maybey even a little background light behind the text?

9/10

Keep up the great work
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9/10, I Love it!

Sam
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the concept is very good but not excuted very well, I ont like how the light streaks coming off from the botto arent even and are really tiny and i know you used the flares for the lighting and to kind of blend the text but could have been done differently, but i do like this alot and the colors
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xUKiSTx wrote 9/10, I Love it!

Sam
thanks for doing exactly what i asked not to do
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The flares are way too bright bro...

Other than that it's pretty good.

7/10
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right ive made v3 to it now
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The oval on v3 makes it look bad to me, and the flares are little to bright

Other then those 2 things 8/10
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Pretty good, just dont like the colour

7/10
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