BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSSSS wrote

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Uhhh, I don't like the 3d Text.. but it looks nice with everything else + Love the colors.


8.3/10

I'm going to point out all that can be made better, and despite it may sound harsh, I have no intention on bashing the work. I'm overly critical with web design since it is what I go to school for, so I hope you can take it with a grain of salt

1. the pen tooled banner doesn't mix well. the stroke on it as well is too thick even if it were to be in place.

2. The main module under the tabs and video and text and such for the body should be raised, not a lowered opacity for the background to be visible. You can keep a texture, but it should be distinguishable what layer is what. I preferably would recommend a slight drop shadow under the main body module.

3. The buttons for font and download don't look right to me. I think its a combination of being too beveled and the edging just looks weird. I'd suggest a rounded edge radius of 2 or 3 only, as it creates a professional and sleek feel to the shape

4. I wouldn't suggest anything 3 dimensional in your banner, it throws off the flow of the image and takes away from the clean and professional look pages are designed to have.

On a brighter note, I do like what you have done with the video embed design and the tabs are well laid out. You also have done a good job with alignment and equality. The top buttons for the social media looks decent as well.

Rating isn't my thing because my ratings usually offend people (since 10 should be the standard of perfect, and nothing is perfect), but I can say this is a nice starting point, esp for a 2nd try. Keep at it, I see potential.

I Agree with Bap, You need to make it all go together by playing with the shading tools.

Bap wrote I'm going to point out all that can be made better, and despite it may sound harsh, I have no intention on bashing the work. I'm overly critical with web design since it is what I go to school for, so I hope you can take it with a grain of salt

1. the pen tooled banner doesn't mix well. the stroke on it as well is too thick even if it were to be in place.

2. The main module under the tabs and video and text and such for the body should be raised, not a lowered opacity for the background to be visible. You can keep a texture, but it should be distinguishable what layer is what. I preferably would recommend a slight drop shadow under the main body module.

3. The buttons for font and download don't look right to me. I think its a combination of being too beveled and the edging just looks weird. I'd suggest a rounded edge radius of 2 or 3 only, as it creates a professional and sleek feel to the shape

4. I wouldn't suggest anything 3 dimensional in your banner, it throws off the flow of the image and takes away from the clean and professional look pages are designed to have.

On a brighter note, I do like what you have done with the video embed design and the tabs are well laid out. You also have done a good job with alignment and equality. The top buttons for the social media looks decent as well.

Rating isn't my thing because my ratings usually offend people (since 10 should be the standard of perfect, and nothing is perfect), but I can say this is a nice starting point, esp for a 2nd try. Keep at it, I see potential.

As usual, typing a page long critique. I didn't know you still creeped these forums.