Some feedback. You ended some clips too early, I like how you didn't try to do to much on your first edit (too many people try doing too much on their first and it ends out terrible) don't round the edges like in the first clip. also crop out the black bars. And learn how to synchronize the music and shots.

Thanks for the Feedback, however in the first clip It's a Blast Shield!

Some of the clips ends were a little gross so I decided to cut them out.

EDIT: The black bars are because of the smaller youtube player size on ttg

TheKowGoesMoo wrote Thanks for the Feedback, however in the first clip It's a Blast Shield!

Some of the clips ends were a little gross so I decided to cut them out.

EDIT: The black bars are because of the smaller youtube player size on ttg

Okay, I see now. But one more thing, you need to get sony vegas pro and adobe after effects. the transitions make it look very amateur and then you can learn some ways to actually edit your clips. I'm working on a little project right now, when I'm done I'll PM it to you (Note I'm not that great either I just know a lot about what great editors do)

Bumpity Bump bump Bump

This would be perfict if you and some transitions and color corections. But over all I give it a 7 out of 10. If you are ever interested in editing a promo tell me. But make sure that you put some color corrections and transitions in there. Pm me, add me on skype: tate.little2, or send me a message on xbox: Start With Joy.