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FastDylan
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Cod4 DeathRun: My Channels Futures Commentary
hello everyone in this video i talk about what i have in store for all you people in the upcoming weeks gamplay is of deathrun on cod4 don't see many commentaries on deathrun so i did just that leave a like and subscribe peace
Plz tell me what you thought
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FastDylan
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come on guys plz tell me what you thought
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u got to talk more about what you are doing in the video cause you had a good like minute to a minute and a half to talk about more things so personally i think you should talk about what the video is about in depth at first ( cause i had no idea what was going on it was just a obsticle course. you should explain like oh ya u can download it by going here or blah blah blah right) then talk about other stuff like it was good u talked about what you wanted to start doing with the channel thats awesome. all in all it was good i liked it keep it up
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nice you stayed relaxed/calm sweet video
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Blazin_420 wrote u got to talk more about what you are doing in the video cause you had a good like minute to a minute and a half to talk about more things so personally i think you should talk about what the video is about in depth at first ( cause i had no idea what was going on it was just a obsticle course. you should explain like oh ya u can download it by going here or blah blah blah right) then talk about other stuff like it was good u talked about what you wanted to start doing with the channel thats awesome. all in all it was good i liked it keep it up

ok thank-you for the advice
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SLOW_TAUNT wrote nice you stayed relaxed/calm sweet video

thanks glad you liked it
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Just want to say, you repeat certain phrases alot such as people and content.

Apart from that, very calm and relaxed. Good video.
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