Firstly, i liked the track.
Good start!
I'd like to see you rapping on a faster beat, as i think it would suit your voice more.
Try a instrumental of someone like Devlin, for example.
His tracks have a fast tempo and i think you'd sound good on them.

Hope that helps buddy, and i hope to see you posting more videos!
See you around.

CarlWyness wrote You ever considered rapping the gay bar?

Rapping the gay bar?

Do you mean Rapping at a Gay Bar, well no I have not but maybe I will..

CarlWyness wrote You ever considered rapping the gay bar?

ayo bro theres no need for that!
ull knock his confidence before hes even started!

MrZombiePenguin wrote i like it man keep up the work

Thank you!<3

That means allot!<3

Naa it will give him a boost trust me

Big_Jon wrote Firstly, i liked the track.
Good start!
I'd like to see you rapping on a faster beat, as i think it would suit your voice more.
Try a instrumental of someone like Devlin, for example.
His tracks have a fast tempo and i think you'd sound good on them.

Hope that helps buddy, and i hope to see you posting more videos!
See you around.

Thank you, I will try so faster beats!<3

CarlWyness wrote Naa it will give him a boost trust me

id like to see u upload a vid of yourself rapping?

rmac2011 wrote

CarlWyness wrote Naa it will give him a boost trust me

id like to see u upload a vid of yourself rapping?

Thanks for sticking up for me, don't get yourself into anything now because it was a silly comment and it really did not offend me.

Haters is a boost for my confidence!<3

OnlyUsingSonyVegas wrote

rmac2011 wrote

CarlWyness wrote Naa it will give him a boost trust me

id like to see u upload a vid of yourself rapping?

Thanks for sticking up for me, don't get yourself into anything now because it was a silly comment and it really did not offend me.

Haters is a boost for my confidence!<3

fair enough bro keep at it and **** the haters :thumbsup:

Anyway if you guys like the video please go on the video and it the Subscribe and like!<3