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Dznbylogic
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Hey guys my first ever try at gfx and manipulations please rate out of 10 so far,
IT'S NOT FINISHED YET I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO ADD! HELP ME PLEASE :d

BUT YEAH SO LEAVE A NICE COMMENT

NICE FEEDBACK WITH POSTIIVE COMMENTS AND WHAT TO IMPROVE WILL BE REPPED :d THANKS VERY MUCH GUYS, ONLY IF THEY HELP!!

- lOGIC

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http://gyazo.com/bdc40fa9531702267825b90830c27870


- COPY AND PASTE THE LINK INTO GOOGLE TO SEE IMAGE!
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What's with the All Caps?

It's way too bright bro so tone that down alot.
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Inkz wrote What's with the All Caps?

It's way too bright bro so tone that down alot.


Ok thanks and my caps lock gets stuck some times

and i will turn it down
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opinions so far please and before u say it's bad i dont do gfx...
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Not bad for first try bro like inkz said make it less bright and work on the lighting also seein as the sun is at the back/side of the statue the front shouldn't be as bright and you need the shadow and maybe a reflection in the water, also the text is off putting and should just be some simple Microsoft text, but good for first try 6 or 7/10
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Superman_1xz wrote Not bad for first try bro like inkz said make it less bright and work on the lighting also seein as the sun is at the back/side of the statue the front shouldn't be as bright and you need the shadow and maybe a reflection in the water, also the text is off putting and should just be some simple Microsoft text, but good for first try 6 or 7/10



thanks very much i will take it into consideration <3 ill rep for feedback tommorow i cant rep any more today

-Logic
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Dznbylogic wrote
Superman_1xz wrote Not bad for first try bro like inkz said make it less bright and work on the lighting also seein as the sun is at the back/side of the statue the front shouldn't be as bright and you need the shadow and maybe a reflection in the water, also the text is off putting and should just be some simple Microsoft text, but good for first try 6 or 7/10



thanks very much i will take it into consideration <3 ill rep for feedback tommorow i cant rep any more today

-Logic


ok no worries
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Superman_1xz wrote Not bad for first try bro like inkz said make it less bright and work on the lighting also seein as the sun is at the back/side of the statue the front shouldn't be as bright and you need the shadow and maybe a reflection in the water, also the text is off putting and should just be some simple Microsoft text, but good for first try 6 or 7/10


but i wanted the front to be really bright to make it the main focous of the pic
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thanks how did u do that ? <3
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