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Comment on if u think it is good or not Please!!! im 12 so it gets kinda crazy xD



In 1947, a basically unknown scientist, or one that really isn't all that great, was exploring in the desert. Nobody remembers what the desert was called. He was gold mining, and he dug and found a circular tunnel like object and you could walk through it. Today, this is known as a Portal and is used by people about 20 million times a day. It is the year of 2157, and What you know as earth no longer exists. Nobody knows how it disapeared, but it did. The scientist walked through the Portal, leading to something was beyond the Technology that he has ever seen. Now, the place he had teleported to is now known as Planet Garadox.

On Planet Garadox, lived a strange, alien race that humans would have never completely figured out the way of life as this race. One day, this scientist showed up randomly. Nobody knew that he was on the planet for all of these years. They saw him as an intruder, but later thought of him as the best thing that has ever happened to Planet Garadox.

The human got to know the Alien Race very well. He learned their language, their way of life, and they also got to know what he was like too. He told them how earth was and how he got on this planet.

One day, Armies of creatures that the two races had never seen came to the planet and their goal seemed to be to kill everyone, and the planet.

They nearly succeeded. The unknown Species killed Millions, and half of The Planet along with all of the deaths. about 100 Aliens survived, and the Human. While the Aliens were searching for survivors, they found two things totally irrelevant but very useful to what they were looking for.

They found a couple of dead Creatures from the Unknown planet, along with something that could have changed Everything. They had found a female version of the human. They helped the Male and Female meet and they fell in love. They were the only two humans to ever step foot on Planet Garadox. The Humans and Aliens joined forces. these 2 humans were going to reproduce and bring back the human race, one person at a time. As for the aliens. The only ones left were all males. but their technology allowed them to create more of their own Species. The aliens rebuilt their race quickly, but not so much for humans.

They brought back some of the Creatures they found alive and received Intel on their planet, what it was called, and who their leader was. The planet is called Lozidon, and Their leader is named Highlord Farrius, And the Aliens and Humans named the species Darrox.

Now in 3019, The Human and Alien races are all back. You are here to help these races build back Planet Garadox to what is was, but even stronger, and you shall also Join the Force and Help kill the Darrox and Destroy Lozidon and Kill Highlord Farrius

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hellgamer21 (11-22-2012)
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Expect an actual story line would have to be 5x longer than that.
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I understand... this is like the beginning cinematic kind of thing. like the story that leads you so you know why you are doing what ur doing.
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The story is actually not too bad ,but it doesn't seem like it would be a game. To me it seems more like a story. If you need any help with the story line, I'm your guy.
*Work on making a longer and more detailed version of the story line

~Yankster~
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