i think that is pretty good 7.5-10

i love narato you earned yourself a 12/10

Senno wrote

Thanks guys

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your welcome senno oh ya and be cautious about the 2020 thing

You really haven't done anything to this piece. You added a random texture for the background. Then you barely smudged a render and then didn't even blend the original render. Also your text may look nice, but it is not the kinda thing that needs to be added to this type of signature. It's just out of place.

love naruto so 15/10

Slyestcat wrote You really haven't done anything to this piece. You added a random texture for the background. Then you barely smudged a render and then didn't even blend the original render. Also your text may look nice, but it is not the kinda thing that needs to be added to this type of signature. It's just out of place.

Senno wrote

Slyestcat wrote You really haven't done anything to this piece. You added a random texture for the background. Then you barely smudged a render and then didn't even blend the original render. Also your text may look nice, but it is not the kinda thing that needs to be added to this type of signature. It's just out of place.

Thats where your wrong, I added multiple fractals and renders to this piece. But thanks for the hardcore criticism, I understand criticism, but dont be a jerk about it

I'm not being a jerk, I'm trying to help you. Even if you did do more then what I stated your piece still isn't that good.

You just need to work on your text.. that's the only thing I think is lacking..

All you f*cking did was copy the same render, and put it in the background to add your so called "depth", in all honesty this shouldn't even be called art. You basically copy and pasted the render, then enlarged it and made the transparency high. There is no depth, the background color you chose is horrid.


As for as the smudging itself goes.... Horrible. All you did was smudge the outline of the Naruto render to make in look abstract, it is very hard to make a smudge art look bad because there are many forms of smudge designs. But somehow you make look horrible.

Please. And this is the nicest way I can put it right now.

SHUT OFF YOUR COMPUTER.

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And for the font;

The hell did you do? Add some random *ss text and chose the worst font you can find? Congrats you found it. The texture you chose makes it look un-natural and out of place. The text in any art ( If any ) should BLEND IN with the rest of it. You did the exact opposite.

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0/10