i agree you should of chosen a font that blends in with the canves

Symbiote wrote All you f*cking did was copy the same render, and put it in the background to add your so called "depth", in all honesty this shouldn't even be called art. You basically copy and pasted the render, then enlarged it and made the transparency high. There is no depth, the background color you chose is horrid.


As for as the smudging itself goes.... Horrible. All you did was smudge the outline of the Naruto render to make in look abstract, it is very hard to make a smudge art look bad because there are many forms of smudge designs. But somehow you make look horrible.

Please. And this is the nicest way I can put it right now.

SHUT OFF YOUR COMPUTER.

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EDIT:

And for the font;

The hell did you do? Add some random *ss text and chose the worst font you can find? Congrats you found it. The texture you chose makes it look un-natural and out of place. The text in any art ( If any ) should BLEND IN with the rest of it. You did the exact opposite.

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SECOND EDIT:

0/10

What doesnt bug me, is your puny insignifigant mind on things, I understand criticism, and good people, but you, your an embaressment to me. You and your little 1 rep 39 post self can high tail it out of the graphics section, you know nothing about graphics! Ha!

Ewwww. No, not much diffrent. It looks plain, needs some eximent and difrent. all i see is texy and smudging. Sorry but, 3/10

Its kind of bad, no offence.

It has no blending, no flow, and no lighting, its just a render with some smudge. Although this can be good, you must have the essentials.

Flow, Lighting, Colors.

Read up on color theorys and read some tutorials on blending on flow and in no time you will be a pro!

I'd give it a 2/10

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Bad blending
Text is god awful
Lacks basic artistic principles
Lighting is non-existent
Depth is non-existent
Smudging is not good/interesting
Flow is bad/non-existent

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Nothing really

i freaking hat it hows that for criticism


JK i love Naruto