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Coretera
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Guys what do you think i could improve on? and the map is called Christmas rush!
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Maybe make the story line a bit longer, it was kinda short.
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I would avoid singing for the first 50 seconds of the video and rambling for the reset of the video.
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-Second- wrote Maybe make the story line a bit longer, it was kinda short.

Ok But the map was short i should have done research into it
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xSyNySteRx wrote I would avoid singing for the first 50 seconds of the video and rambling for the reset of the video.


Thanks for the feed back
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In my opinion you try to be too much like Syndicate, the way you're speaking/acting is very, very similar to him. Try to do your own thing.
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xSyNySteRx wrote I would avoid singing for the first 50 seconds of the video and rambling for the reset of the video.


Thanks for the feed back
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Reflexes wrote In my opinion you try to be too much like Syndicate, the way you're speaking/acting is very, very similar to him. Try to do your own thing.

Thanks bro will do!
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Coretera wrote
-Second- wrote Maybe make the story line a bit longer, it was kinda short.

Ok But the map was short i should have done research into it


Thanks for the feed back anyway
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that map looks really cool
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