J_Lawrence wrote Any one feel up to commenting or giving some good old constructive critisism .....

Going by the second logo, I'm not feeling the right side with all the white. My eye keeps going there because, unfortuanelty that's the focal point right now. Try adding less or chaning the color of the background. Think about how the logo is supposed to make the viewer feel. Right now it probably makes people feel "rushed" persay. think of a more calm approach like you mastered in your first concept. The R itself is perfect, the space around it and how you used the R is completely offputting.

Hope I helped

-kik wrote It's kinda simple sorry bro, 4/10

Like inkz said its not as simple as it looks , maybe you can show me how its done :trollin:

pretty decent man! well done keep it up

J_Lawrence wrote

-kik wrote It's kinda simple sorry bro, 4/10

Like inkz said its not as simple as it looks , maybe you can show me how its done :trollin:

Don't take that type of critism. When someone says they don't like it but they give no explanation as to why, they don't know what they're talking about.

sultehh wrote

J_Lawrence wrote Any one feel up to commenting or giving some good old constructive critisism .....

Going by the second logo, I'm not feeling the right side with all the white. My eye keeps going there because, unfortuanelty that's the focal point right now. Try adding less or chaning the color of the background. Think about how the logo is supposed to make the viewer feel. Right now it probably makes people feel "rushed" persay. think of a more calm approach like you mastered in your first concept. The R itself is perfect, the space around it and how you used the R is completely offputting.

Hope I helped

the background wont be like that when i use it properly when i use it in a proper design , but thanks for the comment