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Going to be honest.

3.5/10.

Criticism
-Background is too plain.
-Text has way too much bevel & emboss imo.
-Icons are boring.
-Guitar images have nothing to them(e.g. position)

To Improve
-Keep trying new things.
-Look at tutorials.
-Take inspiration from other peoples work to improve.

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Dude, you have some really nice work!

Ontopic: It's too boring, your fade is ment to be under your content area, and the guitars are just completely useless, no one would want them on their youtube channel. Overall mark is '2/10' (considering 10 = perfection). I realize it's a harsh mark, but keep trying and you'll eventually reach that 'perfectional' 10 (haha - making words up) if you're producing things like this a beginner.
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I like them but lay off the emboss a little bro
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Well. You can't really use bevel anymore, because you will get trashed for it. You should start with Cinema 4d R12 when you do graphic design, don't use any of Adobe's 3D shiz or stuff like that unless you can make it look absolutely perfect with it. Like a little bevel never hurts. And I would say it is way to plain. Sorry dude.

3/10
Keep trying mate(:
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i like it the guitar is pretty sick 7/10 keep it up!
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It's not that bad for a first.


6/10
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i think it looks ok, but like others said i think u should lower the bevel a bit. but if u like the way it looks then u should keep it like it is, only should change it if u truly want to
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