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Rate my new Photo Manipulation!
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Wow that looks great man 10/10!
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Looks pretty awesome 9/10.
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Wow that looks great man 10/10!Thanks I really appreciate it
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Okay so im gonna give you some real feedback, if you are immature do not continue reading.
Pros:
-Generally a good job when it came to adding the greenery to the island
-General good concept
Problems: (Look at link below)
-Highlighted in red are hard edges/lines (i.e where your stocks have a line at the end of an image visible by the naked eye. To fix those use a soft brush eraser and skim the sides to where they blend)
-Highlighted in blue is where the ocean meets the island, the island seems to be floating rather than seamlessly matches to the water line (Water manipulation is not easy so with a lot of practice and good stocks you will get better)
-Highlighted in yellow are aspects that are disproportional (i.e the crow is far to large for the island and the green leafy area has leaves that are too large)
-The Skull has a rough line connecting the top and right side to the mountain (try some shadowing to fix that)
-Personally i would darkened the wells of the eyes to give it a more ominous effect and possible give the skull a more of a rock feel with some green rather than the current green blend.
-Some of the water has visible blur and smudging which will alter attempted the effect and revile the manipulation.
-Tone down the reflection a lot just so it is barley visible (Reflections can not be seen as well in moving water i.e the ocean)
-Remove/decrease the size of the cinematic bars
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If you have any questions or need further explaining feel free to message me.
Pros:
-Generally a good job when it came to adding the greenery to the island
-General good concept
Problems: (Look at link below)
-Highlighted in red are hard edges/lines (i.e where your stocks have a line at the end of an image visible by the naked eye. To fix those use a soft brush eraser and skim the sides to where they blend)
-Highlighted in blue is where the ocean meets the island, the island seems to be floating rather than seamlessly matches to the water line (Water manipulation is not easy so with a lot of practice and good stocks you will get better)
-Highlighted in yellow are aspects that are disproportional (i.e the crow is far to large for the island and the green leafy area has leaves that are too large)
-The Skull has a rough line connecting the top and right side to the mountain (try some shadowing to fix that)
-Personally i would darkened the wells of the eyes to give it a more ominous effect and possible give the skull a more of a rock feel with some green rather than the current green blend.
-Some of the water has visible blur and smudging which will alter attempted the effect and revile the manipulation.
-Tone down the reflection a lot just so it is barley visible (Reflections can not be seen as well in moving water i.e the ocean)
-Remove/decrease the size of the cinematic bars
Reference Pic:
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If you have any questions or need further explaining feel free to message me.
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Okay so im gonna give you some real feedback, if you are immature do not continue reading.I really appreciate it the tips, I have just started getting back into to Photoshop recently, and I haven't done much with water before
Pros:
-Generally a good job when it came to adding the greenery to the island
-General good concept
Problems: (Look at link below)
-Highlighted in red are hard edges/lines (i.e where your stocks have a line at the end of an image visible by the naked eye. To fix those use a soft brush eraser and skim the sides to where they blend)
-Highlighted in blue is where the ocean meets the island, the island seems to be floating rather than seamlessly matches to the water line (Water manipulation is not easy so with a lot of practice and good stocks you will get better)
-Highlighted in yellow are aspects that are disproportional (i.e the crow is far to large for the island and the green leafy area has leaves that are too large)
-The Skull has a rough line connecting the top and right side to the mountain (try some shadowing to fix that)
-Personally i would darkened the wells of the eyes to give it a more ominous effect and possible give the skull a more of a rock feel with some green rather than the current green blend.
-Some of the water has visible blur and smudging which will alter attempted the effect and revile the manipulation.
-Tone down the reflection a lot just so it is barley visible (Reflections can not be seen as well in moving water i.e the ocean)
-Remove/decrease the size of the cinematic bars
Reference Pic:
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If you have any questions or need further explaining feel free to message me.
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I thought this was pretty cool, I haven't seen this sort of stuff often.
9/10
(I just don't like the bird on top)
9/10
(I just don't like the bird on top)
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Looks pretty good to me, 8/10.
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I thought this was pretty cool, I haven't seen this sort of stuff often.I added that in last minute to give it a more ambient/dark feeling since it was a crow.
9/10
(I just don't like the bird on top)
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That bird looks kinda big
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