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First Website Design - Rate 1-10 - Criticism Welcomed(:
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DuhViirus
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Hey,
I've been doing graphic for a while now but only just decided to have a try creating a web design, and looking for any tips or anything else(:

Here is the design
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Here is a close up of the banner
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Thanks
-Brent
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The "about" text is completely illegible.
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Not bad at all 7-8/10 its a nice clean setup. But kinda Plain
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CroniiKzzxiiSkopEz wrote The "about" text is completely illegible.

Well I'm sorry 'CroniiKzzxiiSkopEz' the 'about' area is not up to your standards(:
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TheEazyJ wrote Not bad at all 7-8/10 its a nice clean setup. But kinda Plain

Thanks for the feedback(:
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i would rate it 6/10 it was okay
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Those shoes look sick. I don't mind paying for those.

Good site, some work may be needed.

8/10
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RZA wrote Those shoes look sick. I don't mind paying for those.

Good site, some work may be needed.

8/10


haha thanks mann(: (I've got a pair of the kobe 8's)
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Looks pretty good to me 7/10
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Gloss like that on a site no.
Main body text, go with something more simple, easy to read. Arial is better than what you went for.
box's designs no, look messy.
it all seams a little empty too....


work on it, look at existing sites and see how the work and are designed.
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