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MillzyakajordanFtw
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please SUBSCRIBE!! it helps me out and ill hit you up with one back if you want also give it a like please

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this is only my 6th ever OCE please give it a rate out of 10
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MillzyakajordanFtw
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come on give some feed back please
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7/10 nice edit

things i didnt like -

text at end kinda hard to read
intro itself was a few seconds too long, maybe cut it down to 5-6 seconds?


other than that a nice edit
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MillzyakajordanFtw
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Akita wrote 7/10 nice edit

things i didnt like -

text at end kinda hard to read
intro itself was a few seconds too long, maybe cut it down to 5-6 seconds?


other than that a nice edit

Thanks !! love the feedback im going to make a new intro soon anyways
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